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犬儿刚满7岁，本人水平有限，无法在作文上给予指导，昨天告诉他，网上有热心的阿姨，还是专业老师，帮忙改作文
他马上回房间用完全不停顿的速度挥就了几篇比较幼稚的短文（那个不肯刷牙的，基本写的就是他自己），十分兴奋，从未试过……
我上来一看{:soso_e127:}大家水平真高，那个作文的作业我们目前还无法企及，只好厚颜另开一贴，望猫妈不吝赐教，非常感谢！
第一篇Mouse In House
A mouse named Boky lived in a house. One day, Boky wants to go for a walk alone. But, on the way he met his good friend Jack. So,they talked for a while, and walked a while. Until Jack said:” Let’s go home.It’s getting late.” So they waved good bye, and went home on their own.
第二篇Handy Doken
“Handy Doken, go and brush your teeth!”
Mrs. Doken said as she pushed Handy into the bath room.
“Noooo!”said Handy.
“Handy,” said Mrs. Doken ,” If you don’t brush your teeth, your teeth will be broken.”
“By what?”
“By germs,” said Mrs. Doken.
“But I don’t belive in germs!” said Handy.
Just then, Handy’s father, Mr. Doken returned home.
“Lingky, help me to make Handy brush his teeth!” Mr. Doken called to Handy’s big brother.
“Okey, pa! I’m coming!”Lingky called back to him.
“You’ll have to brush your teeth, little brother.” Said Lingky as he handed Handy his tooth brush.
“Okey,” said Handy as he sighed loudly. Then he brushed his teeth, and took a bath, and went to sleep quietly. He hope mum won’t notice him!
第三篇 Six Ghosts
Six ghosts want something to eat, so they flew over a jungle, a hill, a city, and a group of butterflies. They went in to a cat’s body, and SUCKED IT’S BLOOD, ATE IT’S HEART, AND THE CAT DIED!
今天中秋，忘了先祝贺大家中秋快乐，现在补上。{:soso_e166:}节日快乐，身体健康{:soso_e166:}
估计猫妈不一定有空上来，我不着急，慢慢等……好东西总是需要付出时间和耐心的。{:soso_e121:}