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记录时间：2013年12月9日
记录内容：Now it's dinner time.But my dad can,t find me,my mom let my dad to find me.My father find me in my room. I was reading a book.My father was angry.He shouted:"Go to eat dinner!"I went out of my room.

记录时间：2013年12月10日
记录内容：I did very much homework in the school today.Now,teacher are giving me A+.I was working harder everyday.Because I want to let my classmate.I was not bad.Soon,I got 93 in math,and I was the second .I was happy this weekend.

记录时间：2013年12月11日
记录内容：I was disappint today.If you ask me why, I will reply:"I got 83.5 in chinese"when I got my test paper,I manted to jump into the air.And I saw my deskmate got 93,I think I will shoot.But I can trow myself.At last teacher gived me a B .I was dataly dissapiint.

记录：I talk with sean about run a red hight yesterday.
         sean asked me:"do you think run a red light is wrong?why?I answerd:"I think run a red light is wrong.Because if you run ared light,maybe the car will bump into you,you will get hurt or even died.If you see your classmate run a red light,and what will you do?"I answered:"I will tell my classmate run red light is dangerous."At last sean asked:"If no one run the red light,waht will our word become?"I answored:"Our word will become a word with out tragedy."

I went to my school this morning. Then I left my homework to my teacher. After that the teacher said to me: " Your homework was the worst in our class." When the school day was over, my  teacher asked me go back to home with her. I was scared by the worst homework. After a while,  we got my home and my teacher asked my daddy directly :" How did your son do his homework?" My lovely daddy answered very quickly : " I help my son done the homework. Is it too perfect?" My teacher just frowned.

I was disappint today.If you ask me why, I will reply:"I got 83.5 in chinese"when I got my test paper,I manted to jump into the air.And I saw my deskmate got 93,I think I will shoot.But I can trow myself.At last teacher gived me a B .I was dataly dissapiint.

I was disppointed today. If you ask me way, I will say:"I scored 83.5 in Chinese." When I received my test paper, I wanted? to jump into the air. And I saw my deskmate scored 93, I thought I want to shoot???( freakout? cry??) But I can trow myself. (trow? believe? trust?) At last my teacher gave me a B grade. I was dataly? (totally?)

本帖最后由 miaowmom 于 2013-12-20 11:16 编辑

记录：I talked with sean about running into a red light yesterday. Sean and I Talk about Running into a Red Light Yesterday.
         Sean asked me:"Do you think running into a red light is wrong?Why?I answerd:"I think running into a red light is wrong, because if you run ran into a red light,maybe the car will bump into you,you will get hurt or even died.( because if you ran into a red light, the car might bump into you, and you will get hurt or even die.) If you see your classmate runing into a red light,and what will you do?"I answered:"I will tell my classmate that running into red light is dangerous."At last Sean asked:"If no one run (ran is better) into the red light,waht will our word world be (not become) become?"I answored (typo?):"Our word world will become a word with out(typo?without)  tragedy."

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