384750922 发表于 2013-12-12 10:51:24

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　　Yesterday,I went to the park with my mother. I saw some trees and some flowers. We sat on the chair. I saw a cat. I gave it some bread. It liked to eat this very much. I ate some bread. I liked to eat this very much,too. After eating bread,I read a book about the naughtiest girl.

痞子盖0101 发表于 2013-12-12 10:54:41

不错哦。小家伙多大？

384750922 发表于 2013-12-12 10:57:52

痞子盖0101 发表于 2013-12-12 10:54 static/image/common/back.gif
不错哦。小家伙多大？

7 years old

用户3830766616 发表于 2013-12-14 20:30:08

pretty good

smallwe 发表于 2013-12-17 13:53:59

是的，写得不错，有空也叫我们家的开始来写。

xdorise 发表于 2013-12-17 13:56:11

不错啊，再接再厉

莉诺娅 发表于 2013-12-31 15:14:26

写的好棒啊
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