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I am walking on the train track, the green plain stretches and stretches, it seems never be over. One, two, three... many cattles are eating grass. I wish I could be one of them. They are so free. The sky is stretching over me, full of clouds, they look like white balloon, big shark, long dragon and some patterns I don't know how to say.   
Tom and timmy, the two puppy are runing behind me. Sometimes Tom climbs into my bag and plays, Timmy scraches me with its paws. I tag them with the green twig.
"DUDUDU...." a train apprears, I run fast into the plain with my puppies, we run and run...the train becomes a dot when we stop.

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  • 巍巍

    2010-11-26 22:37:05 使用道具

    "the two puppy ", should be "the two puppies".
    A nice  short passage, you have very wild imagination, and you can observe the surrouding carefully.
    Come on, you'll be more excellent!