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本帖最后由 dragon1978 于 2012-3-29 22:30 编辑

找了好几遍,也没有找到几个朋友的22集帖子。
发个我自己听记的,不是谦虚,水平有限,希望大家多多指正。

综合了几个朋友的,订正如下:

21集 penelope makes biscuits.

Eggs,butter,flour,sugar.
Lili Rose and Cesarine are in penelope's house.
What are they doing?
Let's make some biscuits.ok.
So they're going to make some biscuits.
What do you do first?
Do you know?
Egg.What do you do with the egg?
Yes.You crack it.oh.
Nice looking egg.
Yeah.It looks like a sun.
After the egg.What's next?
Butter.Yes.
Cream the butter well,then you add the sugar.
Right.
Now you add the flour.
Slowly,carefully,oh,no.
You did it again,penelope.
phew.You're white.
What do we do next?
We mix it again.
Ok,let me do it this time.
More,more,you need to mix the butter well.
It tastes like a biscuit.
And next?
Make it flat.Make it flat.Make it flat.
This is fun.
Don't overdo it!
Now it's time to cut the biscuits out.
Quack,quack.It's a duck.
Twinkle,twinkle,a star.
A,B,P.oh,it's p.p for penelope.
Wow.they've made lots of them.
Wow,how long will it take ?
Oh.
I think they will be ready by the time we finish cleanning up.
After making  biscuits,you have to clean up the kitchen.
That way,the biscuits taste better.
Oh,she can smell the biscuits already.
They smell good.
They will be ready soon.
Soon,soon.be careful,penelope.
Are they ready?yes.they look just right.
Quack,quack.yum.it's delicious.yes.They're so good.
Twinkle,twinkle.they're yummy.
They did a good job.
You have fun,penelope.




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  • YYY

    2012-2-7 08:06:04 使用道具

    英语不错啊,我是不行了。
  • 心情小雨

    2012-2-7 10:08:51 使用道具

    本帖最后由 心情小雨 于 2012-2-7 10:25 编辑

    dragon 好心急 {:soso_e120:} 事实上本来我们已经分工 这集是菲林写的,没想到你抢先了哈!不过,向你致敬!很高兴你也加入听记工作,大家同心协力看来我们很快就能把所有的集数写完了。另外这集应该是21集,别忘记改标题
  • 心情小雨

    2012-2-7 10:24:46 使用道具

    dragon, 我在你基础上改了一下,大家探讨哦!

    21. penelope makes biscuits.

    Eggs,butter,flour,sugar.
    Lili Rose and Cesarine are in penelope's house.
    What are they doing?
    Let's make some biscuits.Ok.
    So they're going to make some biscuits.
    What do you do first?
    Do you know?
    Egg.what do you do with the egg?
    Yes.you crack it.Oh.
    Nice looking egg.
    Yeah!  It looks like a sun.
    After the egg..
    What's next?
    Butter!
    Yes.Cream the butter well,then you add the sugar.
    Right.Now you add the flour.
    Slowly! Carefully!
    Oh,no! You did it again, penelope!
    Phew! (语气词)You're white.
    What do we do next?
    We make it again!
    Ok,let me make it this time.
    More,more,you need to mix the butter well.
    It tastes like a biscuit.
    And next?
    make it flat.make it flat.make it flat.
    This is fun.
    Don't overdo it!
    Now it's time to cut the biscuits out.
    Quack,quack.it's a duck.
    Twinkle,twinkle,a star.
    A,B,P.
    Oh,it's p! P for penelope.
    Wow.they've made lots of them.
    Wow,how long will it take ?
    Oh. I think there be ready by the time we finish cleanning up.
    Ok!

    After making biscuits,you have to clean up the kitchen.
    By the way,the biscuits taste better.
    Oh,she can smell the biscuits are all ready. 我听到的是 she can smell the biscuits already.但前者也讲得通,纠结ing...
    They smell good!
    They will be ready soon.
    Soon,soon.Ah!
    Be carefull,penelope!
    Are they ready?Yes.They look just right.
    Wow!
    Quack,quack.yum.it's deilious.
    Yes.They're so good.
    Twinkle,twinkle.They're yummy.
    They did a good job.
    You have a fun! penelope.
  • TEDDY33

    2012-2-7 11:06:02 使用道具

    我补充一点点呵:
    Roll, roll, you need to mix the butter well.这里听着好象是这词。

    还有delicious的拼写。

  • dragon1978

    楼主 2012-2-7 11:29:01 使用道具

    TEDDY33 发表于 2012-2-7 11:06
    我补充一点点呵:
    Roll, roll, you need to mix the butter well.这里听着好象是这词。

    恩,roll,roll,应该是正确的。
  • dragon1978

    楼主 2012-2-7 11:30:58 使用道具

    心情小雨 发表于 2012-2-7 10:24
    dragon, 我在你基础上改了一下,大家探讨哦!

    21. penelope makes biscuits.

    你改的几个地方的确是我非常不确定的地方。
    一看你改的,我就觉得是我错的。
    原文我就也编辑改一下。免得给其它人添麻烦。呵呵。
  • 菲林

    2012-2-7 17:48:08 使用道具

    被你抢先了,哈哈!
    我改动了几处,贴上来大家看看。
    Phew!(语气词) Oh, you are white.
    What do we do next?
    We mix it again.
    Ok, let me do it this time.


    Wow, how long will it take?
    Well, I think they will be ready by the time we finish cleaning up.
    Ok.
    After making biscuits, you have to clean up the kitchen.
    That way the biscuits taste better.
    Oh, she can smell the biscuits already.




  • dragon1978

    楼主 2012-2-7 18:43:32 使用道具

    菲林 发表于 2012-2-7 17:48
    被你抢先了,哈哈!
    我改动了几处,贴上来大家看看。
    Phew!(语气词) Oh, you are white.

    其它改的很好。
    就是that way那里如何翻译呢?
  • baozimm

    2012-4-2 14:18:17 使用道具

    What do we do  next?好像是what do we do in next
    A, B, P. oh, it's p. p for penelope.应该有个the ,对p的强调。it's the p
  • dragon1978

    楼主 2012-4-2 19:22:24 使用道具

    baozimm 发表于 2012-4-2 14:18
    What do we do  next?好像是what do we do in next
    A, B, P. oh, it's p. p for penelope.应该有个the ,对 ...

    in next如何解释,实在是没有听出来in
  • baozimm

    2012-4-2 20:00:17 使用道具

    dragon1978 发表于 2012-4-2 19:22
    in next如何解释,实在是没有听出来in

    恩,加上in确实语法上也说不过去。
    可能do后有个停顿吧,但是我每次听都觉得有in.

  • wja-tj

    2012-5-8 11:34:11 使用道具

    谢了,直接拿走喽
  • xinruolianhua

    2012-5-16 10:51:57 使用道具

    不错。大家都那么认真!学习了。
  • fbk

    2012-7-27 07:44:36 使用道具

    写的很好,谢谢