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本帖最后由 baozimm 于 2012-3-9 14:06 编辑

午休时间太短,来不及多听,先把文档放出来,供能妈们修改补充用。
52 mum’s birthday
It’s a beautiful day today.
Dad
Hey, penelopy, would you like to help meprepare a party.
A party?
It’s your mum’s birthday today.
Mum’s birthday today.
Shh.. let’s keep it a secret.
A secret.
Hello,What are you talking about?
Mum.
I’m just going to take these flowers I pickto grandma.
Have a good time.
See you later.
Let’s surprise her. Let’s buy the ingredientsto cook something delicious.
Something delicious?  What’s we going to cook?
Mum’s favorite, beef stew.
Beef stew
Here you go.
Look penelopy, now we have the ingredients,let’s go home and start cooking.
Beef stew.
Oh
Oh, what’s the matter, dad.
I forgot to buy some beef.
Oh dear.
Onion, Onion, chop, chop, chop.
Dad, why are you crying? Is somethinghurting you?
Choppen onions makes me cry.
没听出来
Now, 。。。l the beef and cooked in flour
En ,I want to find where the flour is.
Let me see, it’s not here.
How about this? Is this flour,or suger. Yuky,satly,its salt.
Here is the flour.
Dad is frying the beef.
Now let it all stew together.
Stew?
If we stew it for a long time, it will bedelicious.
Let curse the magic spell on it. Bedelicious
Be delicious.
And ,I would give mum some flowers andcard.
You can pick some flowers from the garden.
Yes. Mum’s favorite flowers-red flowers.
Its down, I
I’m home.
Mum’s here. Mum,happy birthday.
Thank you so much. What a beautiful bunchof flowers.
Penelopy, did you draw this for me?
Yes
Thank you.
We would like to invite you to an excellent restaurant today. We have a table for you.
A restaurant?
Please come in.
This way please.
Oh, how lovely.
Well, we owned one dishing this restaurant.
Beef stew.
That I love to have beef stew,please.
Enjoy you meal.
Enjoy you meal.
Thank you, both
Do you like it, mum?
Mmm,yes, it’s really delicious.
Hurray. She likes it,dad.
What a lovely surprise, thank you.
Me and dad cost spell, be delicious,be delicious.
Well, let’s all enjoy your meal.
So everyone,when is your mother’s birthday?


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  • 菲林

    2012-3-8 14:36:13 使用道具

    建议你把我27集里参与讨论的几个妈妈加为好友,用邀请功能让大家一起过来讨论,不然帖子多了,可能注意不到新发的
  • baozimm

    楼主 2012-3-8 16:04:30 使用道具

    菲林 发表于 2012-3-8 14:36
    建议你把我27集里参与讨论的几个妈妈加为好友,用邀请功能让大家一起过来讨论,不然帖子多了,可能注意不到 ...

    不好意思的说,不知道怎么弄:(
  • baozimm

    楼主 2012-3-9 14:02:49 使用道具

    本帖最后由 baozimm 于 2012-3-10 15:13 编辑

    51 penelopy and his friends in the summertime
    Wow!
    It’s the summer holidays, penelopy and her mum and dad have come to the mountains.
    There is a dragonfly.
    Dragonfly, dragonfly.
    What is that? Who is that?
    That’s my baby sister. Her name is Alice. I’m Ulises.
    I’m penelopy, that’s my dad and my mum.
    Hello
    Hello, penelopy, come on and play with us.
    Yes
    Alice and I are in the middle of treasure hance
    Treasure hance?
    I have hiden my treasure and secret place.
    What’s your treasure.
    Something that stretches and shrinks?
    Something  that  stretches and shrinks?
    Can you guess what it is?
    Well everyone ,do you know what is stretches and shrinks?
    A caterpillar. Its stretches and shrinks
    That’s not it. My treasure sparkles when the sun reflates on it.
    It’s sparkles? Yes, a puddle , you treasure is the puddle.
    No, that’s not it. My treasure is in a red box. I’d hide it in a place which you can see from here.
    Some I can see from here?
    Will you search for it with me?
    Yes let’s let together.
    There, I found it, I found the treasure box.
    Are you sure that is the treasure box, penelopy?
    I wonder what inside.
    No, this is our lunch.
    Oh, penelopy.
    Hey, over here. Guess where what is. The red treasure box is round here.
    The red treasure box? This is red flower. That’s red boat. Wow, it’s moving fast, it’s moving very fast.
    Are you all right?
    I found it. The treasure box. What is this?
    I’ll show you. It’s Stretches and shrinks. And look.
    It’s sparkle.
    A sparkle.
    This is a telescope.
    a telescope.
    When you look it straight, things in the distance seem larger.
    Wow. mum and dad look bigger.
    The moon looks very big.
    You’ve need some new friends. It was a fun day, wasn’t it, penelopy.

  • baozimm

    楼主 2012-3-9 14:05:47 使用道具

    本帖最后由 baozimm 于 2012-3-9 14:07 编辑
    菲林 发表于 2012-3-8 14:36
    建议你把我27集里参与讨论的几个妈妈加为好友,用邀请功能让大家一起过来讨论,不然帖子多了,可能注意不到 ...

    菲林,能麻烦你邀请一下么?我没弄明白怎么弄。
    中午又记了一集,有初始文档大家就可以专心听疑难的地方了。
  • 心情小雨

    2012-3-9 15:53:35 使用道具

    我自己找来了 原来有那么多妈妈们一起写啦
  • shelly_huang

    2012-3-10 02:33:06 使用道具

    本帖最后由 shelly_huang 于 2012-3-16 00:01 编辑

    瞎改了一下,不知对不对,大家看看。
    52 Mum’s birthday
    It’s a beautiful day today.
    Dad.
    Hey,penelope, would you like to help me prepare a party.
    A party?
    It’s your mum’s birthday today.
    Mum’s birthday today.
    Shh.. let’s keep it a secret.
    A secret.
    Hello, What are you talking about?
    Mum.
    I’m just going to take these flowers I pick to grandma’s.
    Have a good time.
    See you later.
    Let’s surprise her. Let’s buy the ingredients to cook something delicious.
    Something delicious ?  What are we going to cook?
    Mum’s favorite, beef stew.
    Beef stew
    Here you go.
    Look, Penelope,now we have the ingredients, let’s go home and start cooking.
    Beef stew.
    Oh
    Oh, what’s the matter, dad.
    I forgot to buy some beef.
    Oh dear.
    Onion,Onion, chop, chop, chop.
    Dad, why are you crying? Is something hurting you?
    Chopping onions makes me cry.
    Nearly done,dad.
    Yes.
    Now, sprinkle salt over the beef and coated in flour.
    En ,I wonder where the flour is.
    Let me see,it’s not here.
    How about this? Is this flour, or suger. Yuky, salty ,its salt.      
    Here is the flour.
    Dad is frying the beef.
    Now, let it all stew together.
    Stew?
    If we stew it for a long time, it would be delicious.
    Let’s curse the magic spell on it.
    Be delicious.Be delicious.
    And ,I would give mum some flowers and cards.
    You can pick some flowers from the garden.
    Yes. Mum’s favorite flowers-red flowers.
    It’s done, I hope mum would like it.
    I’m home.
    Mum’s here.Mum,happy birthday.
    Thank you so much. What a beautiful bunch of flowers.
    Penelope,did you draw this for me?
    Yes
    Thank you.
    We would like to invite you to an excellent restaurant today. We have a table for you.
    A restaurant?
    Please come in.
    This way,please.
    Oh, how lovely.
    Well, we only serve one dish in this restaurant.
    Beef stew.
    Then I like to have beef stew, please.
    Enjoy your meal.
    Enjoy your meal.
    Thank you,both
    Do you likeit, mum?
    Mmm, yes,it’s really delicious.
    Hurray. She likes it, dad.
    What a lovely surprise, thank you.
    Me and dad cursed a spell, be delicious, be delicious.
    Well, let’s all enjoy your meal.
    So everyone,when is your mother’s birthday?

  • TEDDY33

    2012-3-10 17:43:51 使用道具

    baozimm 发表于 2012-3-9 14:02
    51 penelopy and his friends in the summertime
    Wow!
    It’s the summer holidays, penelopy and her mum ...

    楼主辛苦了。^o^
    改一点小地方呵。"Alice and I are in the middle of treasure hance
    Treasure hance? "  这里应该是treasure hunt.(寻宝游戏)
  • TEDDY33

    2012-3-10 18:08:30 使用道具

    本帖最后由 TEDDY33 于 2012-3-11 08:56 编辑

    楼主 baozimm 辛苦了。我帮着改一点点呵,大家一起讨论呵。
    (11日,在Amy 妈妈的意见下再做了进一步修改。如果还有什么需要改进的地方,大家积极发言呵。)

    51 penelope and his friends in the summertime
    Wow!
    It’s the summer holidays, penelope and her mum and dad have come to the mountains.
    There is a dragonfly.
    Dragonfly, dragonfly.
    What is that? Who is that?
    That’s my baby sister. Her name is Alice. I’m Ulysses.
    I’m penelope, that’s my dad and my mum.
    Hello
    Hello, penelope, come on and play with us.
    Yes
    Alice and I are in the middle of treasure hunt
    Treasure hunt?
    I have hidden my treasure in a  secret place.
    What’s your treasure.
    Something that stretches and shrinks?
    Something  that  stretches and shrinks?
    Can you guess what it is?
    Well everyone ,do you know something that  stretches and shrinks?
    Something that stretches and shrinks?
    A caterpillar. It stretches and shrinks
    That’s not it. My treasure sparkles when the sun reflects on it.
    It sparkles? Yes, a puddle , your treasure is the puddle.
    No, that’s not it. My treasure is in a red box. I’d hidden it in a place which you can see from here.
    Somewhere  I can see from here?
    Will you search for it with me?
    Yes let’s look together.
    There, I found it, I found the treasure box.
    Are you sure that is the treasure box, penelopy?
    I wonder what is inside.
    No, this is our lunch.
    Oh, penelope.
    Hey, over here. Guess where it is. The red treasure box is round here.
    The red treasure box? This is red flower. That’s a red boat. Wow, it’s moving fast, it’s moving very fast.
    Are you all right?
    I found it. The treasure box. What is this?
    I’ll show you. It’s Stretches and shrinks. And look.
    It sparkle.
    A sparkle.
    This is a telescope.
    a telescope.
    When you look in straight, things in the distance seem larger.
    Wow. mum and dad look bigger.
    The moon looks very big.
    You’ve made some new friends. It was a fun day, wasn’t it, penelope.


  • shelly_huang

    2012-3-10 19:53:03 使用道具

    本帖最后由 shelly_huang 于 2012-3-10 19:53 编辑

    TEDDY33改的真不错!51集还有几个小地方是否这样的:
    Her name is Alice. I’m Ulysses.
    Treasure hunts? (好象有S)
    I have hidden my treasure in a secret place. ( hide ...in....好象比较顺口)
    let's look together. (听起来没有其它音了)
    That’s a red boat.

    When you look in straight,things in the distance seem larger.


  • anita_xu

    2012-3-10 22:18:53 使用道具

    shelly_huang 发表于 2012-3-10 02:33
    瞎改了一下,不知对不对,大家看看。
    52 Mum’s birthdayIt’s a beautiful day today.Dad.Hey,penelope,  ...

    黄体部分:“nearly done that?”
  • anita_xu

    2012-3-10 22:21:03 使用道具

    anita_xu 发表于 2012-3-10 22:18
    黄体部分:“nearly done that?”

    “Now, sprinkle salt over the beef and coated in flour”应该是 “coat it"吧
  • fangshidie

    2012-3-10 22:22:36 使用道具

    第一集在哪里
  • 心情小雨

    2012-3-14 12:43:48 使用道具

    本帖最后由 心情小雨 于 2012-3-14 12:44 编辑

    51集,Something that stretches and shrinks?  A caterpillar. It stretches and it shrinks 漏了个 it.
    其他都改到位了。大家辛苦了。厉害厉害!
  • wja-tj

    2012-5-8 14:29:39 使用道具

    亲们辛苦啦,下了5个小时,连看再改,还没有下完。谢谢了
  • juu6188

    2012-5-15 14:42:30 使用道具

    谢谢啦,辛苦!