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孩子要参加一个比赛，有个环节是show and tell，我想不出展示什么，孩子喜欢画画，就让她画了一幅画然后去介绍画的内容。
请帮我看看这段话有没有什么语法错误，句子能不能尽量改得更简单一些和句式整齐一些。
I like painting. I painted the picture by myself.it is a story. There are a food-tree and a beautiful house in the forest ,there are many foods in the tree,hamburger,icecream, doughnut, lollipop,star cake , chocolate .it is a windy day,mummy and daddy climbed up the ladder, mummy pick a doughnut,daddy pick a hamburger.some foods in the tree are blown down by the winds.it is a surprise. I and my brother is very happy,my brother pick up a bread, I pick up a lollipop,and now winds is stop, so we go home and enjoy delicious food.the end.
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孩子要参加一个比赛，有个环节是show and tell，我想不出展示什么，孩子喜欢画画，就让她画了一幅画然后去介绍画的内容。
请帮我看看这段话有没有什么语法错误，句子能不能尽量改得更简单一些和句式整齐一些。
I like painting. I painted the picture by myself.it is a story. There are a food-tree and a beautiful house in the forest ,there are many foods in the tree,hamburger,icecream, doughnut, lollipop,star cake , chocolate .it is a windy day,mummy and daddy climbed up the ladder, mummy pick a doughnut,daddy pick a hamburger.some foods in the tree are blown down by the winds.it is a surprise. I and my brother is very happy,my brother pick up a bread, I pick up a lollipop,and now winds is stop, so we go home and enjoy delicious food.the end.
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