本帖最后由 恩恩妈 于 2013-7-22 11:10 编辑
这个星期要求宝贝一天一篇英语作文，他的兴趣挺高。我刚开始挺惊喜，给的表扬也多，到后来习以为常，要求也高了，表扬少了，提的意见也多了，宝贝有点不开心，看来妈妈的教学方法有待改进。贴几篇作文，几乎未作修改。
我家宝贝三年级，4周岁开始学英语，进度非常慢，从来不对他提过高的要求，只要求他坚持。
Little Bird Jack
Tonight I couldn’t go to sleep, so mum told me a story.
It was about a little Bird lived in a jungle. His name was Jack. He could fly, but not very well. His father and mother taught him how to fly.
It was a sunny morning. Mommy bird and daddy bird taught baby birds to learn how to fly. Mommy bird said,“Daddy bird will fly down to the ground, then I will push you down. You will flap your wings. Then daddy bird will catch you.” So mommy bird pushed the baby birds to the ground. In the beginning, the baby birds were very scared, but then they weren’t scared anymore. When the sun went down, the baby bird could fly but not very well.
The next day, mommy bird and daddy bird had to fly out to find some wiggly worms. Daddy bird said to baby birds,” mommy bird and I have to find some wiggly worms. You have to stay in the nest. ” Baby birds said, “OK’. But Jack didn’t want to stay in the nest. When daddy and mommy went out, Jack flew out into the sky. He flew and flew. He saw the jungle. He saw tigers, lions, deer and many animals. He saw a river, he began to fly down. But he was falling down. He might fall into the river. Just then, mommy bird saw him. So she flew to Jack and grabbed him. She said,” You are a naughty little bird.” Then mommy bird, daddy bird and Jack flew back to the nest.
I was sleepy. I dreamed that I was the little bird Jack.
Go on Vacation
Today, dad, mum and I would go the Hawaii. I was very excited. But no one would take care of my pets. Mum had an idea. “You can call Anna to take care of your pets.” So I called Anna to ask her to take care of my pets. Anna was very happy. She likes pets too.
Then we went to the port. There were many ships and boats. There were little boats that could go fishing and big ships that could go to places far away. Our ship was called Big Ocean. It was very fast. I looked at the ocean on the deck. There were many little fish jumping out the water and Dolphin singing. There were seagulls flying in the sky and landing on the deck. “Hello!” I said to a seagull. The seagull flied away and shouted. As if the seagull were saying “Good bye!”
An hour later, it was lunch time. Dad took out the picnic blanket. We ate yummy food on the deck and looked at the sea, the sky and the far-away small Hawaii Island.
这个故事纯属虚构，我们没去过夏威夷，我们还没出过国门。
虽然我看不懂，也不知道对错。先点掌声，鼓励小家伙 {:soso_e163:}