这两天的作文
前几天发的作文得到了大家的鼓励，今天再发昨天和今天的作文，希望能够坚持一天一篇作文。DinosaursTonight, I was very tired. So I fell to sleep quickly. I had a dream. I dreamed I went back to the dinosaur time. There were many dinosaurs shouting. Suddenly, a tyrannosaur appeared behind a tree far away. I hided in some trees and grasses quickly. The tyrannosaur didn’t see me. Just then a pterosaur landed beside me. I am not scared. Because I know pterosaurs didn’t eat people. I climbed the pterosaur’s back. Then the pterosaur flied into the sky. I saw some triceratops from the sky. They had three pointing horns. I saw a tyrannosaur chasing some little dinosaurs with his open mouth…….My pterosaur was hungry. He wanted to fly to catch some fish. So he flied to a river. He saw a fish. He caught the fish very quickly. I almost fell out . I grabbed pterosaur’s back as hard as I could. The pterosaur flew into the sky again. Phew, that was close. The sun was going down. I had to go. I had a good time. The sun was shining through my window. It was morning. I woke up.
我们中文还写不好呢。 写得不错，不过有几处小小的错误需要改一下。是楼主自己写的吗？ Bigmother 发表于 2013-7-30 10:32 static/image/common/back.gif
写得不错，不过有几处小小的错误需要改一下。是楼主自己写的吗？
是有一些错误，我忘了修改，是我家宝贝儿子写的。
恩恩妈 发表于 2013-8-1 15:23 static/image/common/back.gif
是有一些错误，我忘了修改，是我家宝贝儿子写的。
哇，那你小孩的英语很厉害啊，让我们家宝贝望尘莫及了，呵呵。楼主本身是英语老师吗？
Bigmother 发表于 2013-8-2 09:04 static/image/common/back.gif
哇，那你小孩的英语很厉害啊，让我们家宝贝望尘莫及了，呵呵。楼主本身是英语老师吗？
不是英语老师啦，以前做了十年的翻译，现在改行了。 写得不错,写得不错 真的很好，值得学习。
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