暑假中文基本靠阅读维持，少了老师每天的书写作业，这次作文感到错别字也多，字也写的差，文字表达也不清晰，要修改的地方太多，这个只有等开学后再强化了。
游泳
暑假的一天，爸爸打算带我去游泳，我高兴地一蹦三尺高，因为我好久没去那了。
到了高尔夫，我快速换好泳装，刚准备下水，爸爸就给了我浮板和浮袖，让我去深水区游，我顿时惊慌失措，不过我还是小心翼翼地走下了梯子。一开始，我手紧紧地抓住墙，因为我脚还够不到地呢，慢慢地，身体可以浮起来了，这时，我拼命用脚打水，感到身子漂浮起来了，有点象在太空漫步哦！
游了一会，我紧张的心情逐渐缓解，我开始试图“仰泳”，当身体漂浮在水面上时，头却忽然下沉了，耳朵进了不少水，我赶紧调整了个舒服的姿势，对着头顶上的蓝天白云，真是惬意啊。忽然，“呼啦呼啦”，一个影子从我身边水下快速打水游过，我赶紧躲闪，水花还是溅了我一脸，泳帽也掉了，我头整个潮湿的象个“落汤鸡”。
暑假游泳真的是一件清凉乐事啊！
想帮女儿sally 报名参加 小组，不知道现在还得及不？
找到一篇她2012-07-06 写的自我介绍。
My name is Sally.A clever girl!
I am seven years old now.There are seven members in my big family. They are my grandfather、grandmother、father、mother、uncle、aunt and I. I love my family. I was born in Nan Jing .And I live in Nan Jing now.
I get up at six o’clock every morning. My mother cooks breakfast every day. I love jumping rope best. I like to read English very much. I like eating ice-cream、fruit and candy. I like drinking juice、milk、Coke and milktea. I don’t like watching TV. I like playing football and playing chess. Oh! I am good at washing bowls. Sometimes I can do some housework to help my mother.
I like sunny day, because I can go outside and play game with my friends. I like snowy day, because I can make a snowman. I don’t like rainy day. because I can’t go outside and play games.
I am a student. I love my school! I really like all of my classmates and my teacher.
I like to go to the movies with mother in the weekend.
Do you remember me now ?
本帖最后由 W00 于 2013-8-30 10:15 编辑
这个好啊 我们家也喜欢写。。。。。却不知道这么引导
long long ago,a man want to buideda super plane.but he doesn\'t, nowhat to do.he tryto use paper.andhefire the plane .\"oh!why\'re you answer .he hear thefire say: \"kez zek zek !\" he canhear th what the fire say:\" oh,i must fire your plant !\" he is very thirsy now.he ran to his fram.but the farm door had a note :no miketo day !miss cow .\"a! no mike\" shought man .and he drink the river\" goulou gou lou !\" he say. at the endofthetree hadtoo many i ron. and he\'s eyes bright . he qunick ues iron building an super plane.he build it three day .finaly it very build perfect.
水中城市威尼斯
7月8号早晨我和爸爸妈妈爷爷，一起来到了美丽的水中城威尼斯。
威尼斯是个不寻常的城市，建在水中的，而且整个城市的交通公具不是汽车或自行车，而是船。我给你们介绍一下那里交通工具，有黑色的凤尾船，有公交船、有出租车船，还有摩托艇，和快艇……
我们去了威尼斯有名的大教堂，这座教堂的名字是圣比得大教堂，这座教堂的每一扇窗户上都是彩色的，每一扇窗子上都画着一个圣经故事，一出圣彼得大教堂，我们看见了一个广场，广场中间是一个钟楼，这个广场叫圣彼得广场。广场上有许多鸽子，这些鸽子都很胖，当我在地上放一点食物时，成群的鸽子会飞到我这里来抢食
让我觉的最特别的是，威尼斯城市底下是用木头做地基，然后再在上面铺上石板，最后再在上面盖房子，那些木头在水里不会腐烂的，它们反而会变的坚硬如铁，神奇吧！
下午我们将要离开水中城市威尼斯，我想我会一直记得这个神奇的城市。
bob 的作文，进行过一些修改！
培培妈妈2005 发表于 2013-8-30 10:55
bob 的作文，进行过一些修改！
這次的中文寫作估計我們沒有戲今天還在補暑假作業你們繼續吧。
yy\'mom 发表于 2013-8-30 17:00 static/image/common/back.gif
這次的中文寫作估計我們沒有戲今天還在補暑假作業你們繼續吧。
期待你们的参加：）
这周从孩子们的中文文章中，我也学到了很多新知识，增长了见闻，感谢大家的努力。这周日，请Max小朋友提出本周的英文写作要求，期待大家的作品。
Hi, this is Max. For this week, please write about your most favorite activity in school and explain why you like it the most. It could be one of the classes, an extra curriculum activity, or a school team or group you are in.
本帖最后由 洋洋妈 于 2013-9-3 05:38 编辑
杨杨这周的作文
My favorite school activity
My favorite activity at school is school choir. Our choir teacher is Mrs. House. She used to be a professional opera singer. She also plays the piano very well. Every Friday afternoon we have choir practice from half past one to three. We have learned about 8 or 9 songs. The songs we are learning now are the song Africa and a Spanish song - Erus tu / touch the wind.
I like the choir because it can help me practice my memory by remembering the songs and overcome the stage fright by standing on the stage singing. Also I can be one of the first to hear the choir sing and enjoy the beautiful music. We have already performed at school. At first I had stage fright. I was so scared that I did have butterflies in my stomach and my legs were trembling. But when we finished the songs and heard the sound of applause from the audience, I felt relieved and proud of myself. Now when I go onto the stage，I feel much more confident.
My favorite school activity last year was the Year 3 Sleepover. In that day, we brought sleeping bags to school and slept on the floor of our school gym.
Once we were dropped off in school that evening, we started playing some games and even danced in Gangnam style. After all the games and dancing, we were very tired and that was just the best time to start having dinner. When we all sat down in the canteen, whoever had the best table manner got to eat first. We had a delicious dinner with lamb sticks, meatballs, mini burgers, pizzas, water melon and all that good stuff. After dinner, we changed into our pajamas and got our torches and began to look for hedgehogs on the campus. Teachers were dressed in ghost suits and they were supposed to scare us in the hunt, but it ended up being us chasing the ghosts.
In the end, we brushed our teeth and tucked in into our sleeping bags to watch a movie. I fell asleep in the middle of the movie because I was so tired.
-Max
I don’t go to cause wars!
I like play outside, but I can’t play or pee when we are in a war, like when we fighting 2(6) I am very annoyance, and when I went for a pee, one of the person in 2(6) fight my leg and my leg is ache and I think it is hurt. So I don’t go to cause a war with other person.
英语作文，实在写的不怎么样！我水平也不高，这个是他自己写的，没人有空给他改！而且是今天刚刚写的，开学了开始忙，不过还是希望能给予意见！慢慢进步吧！
本帖最后由 洋洋妈 于 2013-9-7 15:40 编辑
培培妈妈2005 发表于 2013-9-6 19:25 http://www.ebama.net/static/image/common/back.gif
英语作文，实在写的不怎么样！我水平也不高，这个是他自己写的，没人有空给他改！而且是今天刚刚写的，开学 ...
Bob\'s favorite school activity
My favorite activity at school is playing on the playground during break time. I like it best because I can play different games with my classmates, get relaxed and have a lot of fun. But I don’t like people fighting around me. Once on the way to the toilet I passed some boys who were fighting , and my leg got hurt by one of them. That’s why I don’t fight with people.
Hi, Bob. Is it what you want to say? -----Yang yang
还有上厕所就用go to the toilet就行了，只有很小的孩子，口语中才会用wee-wee, poo-poo这些词。 ------杨杨妈
Myfavoriteschool activity is spring outing every year .I like it so much because on that day nobody stays at school , all the students of our school join in it.We go out to a park or climb a mountain ,play games and have picnic with teachers and classmates.It’s very funny that people outside stare at us very strangely when we walk on the street,perhaps they think we should stay at school at that time.When we get there ,We play and run , drink and eat, talk and laugh., We are so excitedthat we look like the birds just coming out from birdcage.! During March, trees turn green, flowers blossom, and the sun shines brightly .The air in the open field is fresher ,it does a lot of good to our health..So I take deeply breath，I love this activity!
本帖最后由 洋洋妈 于 2013-9-7 08:16 编辑
可以理解国内孩子这周开学了，学校内的学习任务就比较重了，作业会挺多。所以以后请leader of the week，在每周六就把写作主题和要求发上来吧，给大家更多些时间写作，还是要谢谢孩子们和家长的努力。
这周是轮到Sophia小朋友，给大家提出中文的写作主题了，会是什么呢？
培培妈妈2005 发表于 2013-9-6 19:25 static/image/common/back.gif
英语作文，实在写的不怎么样！我水平也不高，这个是他自己写的，没人有空给他改！而且是今天刚刚写的，开学 ...
阅读现在也就看到神奇树屋第30本这样！每天都会看，现在英语阅读开始有兴趣了，不过还是比较喜欢中文书的阅读！
本帖最后由 yy\'mom 于 2013-9-10 10:09 编辑
My favorite activity is a field trip. Our school runs the day trip
two times one year. I really would like it happens every day.
Let me tell you why I do like the field trip. Frist of all, I don\'t have
any homework and test; I don\'t need to sit in the classroom, when I
have a day trip.
Next, I can see the color of new thing at very nature way. Usually,
I and my classmates roll down the hill one by one. I heard many
birds singing like a choir. I can see pretty and colorful flowers and butterfly.
we can scream and play whatever we want.
Moreover, I can go to the museum. I remeber I was there to watch 4D filmaboutvolcano. It really scared me when the film went to\" boom!\". The sound
let me have a nightmate at that night. But even that, I still like to visit museum.
Outside school, I feelI become the free bird. When I was under the
bluy sky and lay green grass, it is really wonderful moment.
Sophiia 这周出的写作主题是就大家最近看的书或者最喜欢的书写一篇读后感，若是没时间看中文书的话，也可以用中文写英文书的读后感
本帖最后由 洋洋妈 于 2013-9-9 11:37 编辑
杨杨的作文
《西游记》读后感
我喜欢的一本中文书是《西游记》。这本书讲了唐僧师徒四人去西天取经的故事。
在《西游记》里我最喜欢孙悟空，因为他很勇敢，还有七十二变、腾云驾雾、火眼金睛的本事，打败了很多妖魔鬼怪。我不怎么喜欢猪八戒，因为他很懒惰，还总是偷吃食物。沙僧比猪八戒更勤劳，因为他一路都挑着担子。唐僧要到西天取经是因为他想求到真正的佛法，普渡众生。唐僧教会我要坚持到底，不放弃。沙僧教会我要脚踏实地。孙悟空教会我要有真本领，要正直勇敢。猪八戒教会我，不要好吃懒做。
英文写作算是最难的一部份了, 要写得好真的很不容易
这个作业还真心难啊，今天终于完成了：
我今天读的是《大头儿子和小头爸爸》里的一篇故事，故事的名字叫做《来自一个小城市的邀请》。故事讲的是一个只有100名市民的小城市，所以大家都相互认识。有一年，他们想邀请大头儿子和小头爸爸来竞选市长。结果大家投票的时候，一个很有趣的情况发生了：有一半的人投了大头儿子的票，有一半的人投了小头爸爸的票。这时有人出了一个注意，让大头儿子和小头爸爸进行顶头比赛，由胜者担任市长。但比赛结果还是平局，所以老市长就建议由他自已继续担任新的市长，由大头儿子和小头爸爸共同担任副市长，可是市民们不同意，想让大头儿子和小头爸爸共同担任主市长。老市长没有办法，最后只有听从了市民们的建议。
我感觉这个故事很有趣，因为大头儿子和小头爸爸无论如何总是平局。
-Max
这次我看了一本书，书名叫《小树妖》。我看了这本书后，我学到了很多知识，我现在来介绍一下，我读了这本书后的感受吧。
这本书里的人物有小树妖：小醋妖、小姜妖、小胡椒，小精灵：小精灵大头、小精灵木匠还有菜农等等，我最喜欢的人物是3个小树妖，他们被关在小精灵过里最大的参天大树已经有1000多年了，后来小精灵们看下大树，三个小树妖终于重见天日，他们已经在大树里关了1235年了，所以它们要把被关在树里的1235年补回来。以后小树妖们一直搞恶作剧，后面的事情可有趣了。
这本书里最好笑的事情是：在小精灵铁匠往小树妖的锁孔张望时，站在门后的小树妖用水球喷了他一身水，还有一件有趣的事是，小精灵要报复小树妖，在树丛里挖了一个坑，最后三个小树妖都陷进坑里了。
如果你们来我家，我一定会把这本有趣又好看的书给你看，相信这本书能给你带来快乐。
bob
今天我读的是绘本《公主的月亮》，故事说的是一个海边的王国里，有一位公主，突然有天生病了，她向国王爸爸要月亮，否则就一直卧病在床，御医们都束手无策，于是，着急的国王叫来了王宫里最聪明的3个人，可想而知，他们都说根本没有可能从天上摘到月亮，反而是毫不起眼的宫廷小丑最后想出了办法，他认为：每个人心目中都有一个自己的月亮，为什么不去问问公主，她心目中的月亮究竟是什么呢？原来公主认为月亮是金子做的，大拇指样大小，于是小丑用金子做了个月亮挂在公主胸前，可是，“月亮怎么会既挂在天上，又在公主胸前呢”，在大家都以为要露馅的时候，小丑依然跑去问公主这个问题，原来公主早就有了答案“如果我的牙掉了，一颗新牙就会从原来的地方长出来，月亮也一样啊”。多么简单，多么意想不到的答案。
看了这个故事，我才知道原来最聪明的人不一定是那些有一些成就，自以为是的人，是懂得和别人交流，会听取别人意见的人。还有，有时候爸爸妈妈就象那个国王一样，可能会误解我们，不知道如何让我们开心，这个时候，要大胆说出心中的想法，公主最后心满意足地得到了她心目中的月亮，希望我们也能得到我们自己心目中的月亮哦。
这周看了孩子们的中文读后感，更多了解了些孩子们喜欢看的书是什么样的，也鼓励自己能成为像Sophia故事中的小丑那样会听取孩子意见的家长，帮孩子得到心中的月亮。
这周是由Yuan yuan小朋友来提出本周的英文写作主题和要求了， 元元，听你的。
Writing. Diamante Poems
Key Features of Diamante Poems
- seven lines
-First and last lines have one nouns, usually with opposite meanings
-Second and six lines have adjectives
-third and fifth lines have verbs(-ed or -ing)
-Fourth line has four nouns
这个小组形式学习写作真不错，我怎么没早看到啊！
哈哈， 好题目，短小但有趣：
本帖最后由 洋洋妈 于 2013-9-15 13:42 编辑
杨杨四年级时在学校学过写这种“钻石七行诗”。规则是在第一行和第七行，各写一个名词主题，通常为相反或对应的两个名词，比如dog V cat, summer V winter等等。第二行和第六行分别用两个形容词来描述那个名词。第三行和第五行分别用三个动词描述主题名词。第四行用四个名词，前两个是有关上面名词的，后两个是和下面名词相关的。杨杨自己觉得写这种诗还挺好玩的，the hardest part is choosing an interesting topic. 这次杨杨选择写古典吉他V 电吉他，他之前学过一年classic guitar，现在在学rock guitar。下面是杨杨的诗。
Classic guitar
Peaceful, beautiful
Stroking, plucking, flowing
Solo, melody, band, Rock & roll
Picking, sweeping, plugging
Noisy, crazy
Rock guitar
Birds
Beautiful, dreamful
Chirping, flying, singing
Brown , green , red, yellow
Falling,flowing,whispering
Strange,pretty
Trees