多给孩子写作创造各种英文素材
本帖最后由 qiankun3 于 2016-12-27 16:10 编辑英语思维。
做个沙发。 小鹭鹭这次写的文章错误颇多，可能是因为只是午休时间匆忙之作吧。
我尝试改了一下很明显的错误（能不改的我尽量不该，标点符号删掉了一点，空格加了一点）
HOWTOWALKADOG （题目和内容不配合，也许应改成 BUYING A DOG 或者 TRAINING A DOG）
There once was a dog shop that had a beautiful dog. His fur was beautiful and his ears were covered with black spots. So everyone wanted to buy him.
One day, an old man came to this shop. He wanted to buy a dog that was beautiful. He found one that was the most beautiful. So he paid for the supermarket clerk (应该是shopkeeper 或者是 cashier/ he paid the shopkeeper, 不需要 for, 不然就好像是代他付款), but on the way home he couldn’t control the dog.
So the next morning, the old man trained the dog to do what he told him to do. And so the man kept training the dog till the dog was very nice. 第一句和第二句不是一个主语吧？所以第二句上来就用his是不是不大对啊 walk a dog, 如果不是经常看原版儿童故事书, 我相信很多人也不一定知道是啥意思 sandydad 发表于 2013-11-18 20:00 static/image/common/back.gif
walk a dog, 如果不是经常看原版儿童故事书, 我相信很多人也不一定知道是啥意思
这您也夸张了,不就是走狗的意思吗?我小学就知道了 sandydad 发表于 2013-11-18 20:00 static/image/common/back.gif
walk a dog, 如果不是经常看原版儿童故事书, 我相信很多人也不一定知道是啥意思
内容比较散，没有扣主题。这个问题最近有些凸显。 真是细心周到的负责任的爸爸啊 写的很好啊 THE SILLY DAUGHTER
There once lived an old woman who had a naughty daughter, cause she thought she was clever.
One day the naughty daughter woke up very late and dressed up very slowly.
She crawled to school like a snail. Her teacher said :” It’s all ready for school to start, why did you come late again?”
The daughter said:”It’s not my fault, because this morning I was looking for my pen. The teacher wanted the class to call the daughter silly, all the students said:”That’s a good idea!”
So every student called the naughty daughter silly.
The end
From Lulu
受教了！好好向您学习！
这年龄厉害啊
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