qiankun3 发表于 2013-12-3 16:36:30

今天中午鹭鹭写的作文很搞笑

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lucky2000 发表于 2013-12-3 16:42:26

同感，很久不见啦
写得太好了

痞子盖0101 发表于 2013-12-3 16:43:35

六岁就能写这么好的文章...感谢阅读...

逃离神庙 发表于 2013-12-3 16:47:02

sweetberry 发表于 2013-12-3 16:50:56

很不错哦，The next day很经典，哈哈

墨遥妈妈 发表于 2013-12-3 16:54:19

luckywoman99 发表于 2013-12-3 16:57:57

六岁能写出这么好的文章，太棒了。

而且小孩的生活经验很丰富啊

tdc_001 发表于 2013-12-3 17:04:42

很有意思         

dsfdsg 发表于 2013-12-3 17:13:10

Sowilly 发表于 2013-12-3 17:21:52

赞一个，小朋友很有逻辑

impose 发表于 2013-12-3 17:21:54

太厉害了，我都写不出来。

bakyyy 发表于 2013-12-3 18:01:05

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太厉害了，我都写不出来。

双城记_ 发表于 2013-12-3 18:25:37

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我这个人比较教条和循规蹈矩。因此我觉得写作不能自己太过天马行空。不知道鹭鹭的中文写作是和英文同步还是比中文慢。对双语孩子，个人感觉英文可能更快。从小打下写作的基础很重要。就是写什么和怎么写。网里有太多很好的资源，完全可以借鉴他们来提高鹭鹭的英文写作水平。她是那么可爱和聪明的孩子。

用户3830766616 发表于 2013-12-3 19:54:22

真有意思 很不錯

pph0259 发表于 2013-12-3 21:13:07

居然是剖腹产！

希同学的妈妈 发表于 2013-12-3 21:25:53

anniewen2002 发表于 2013-12-3 22:15:59

好久不见，一见就一鸣惊人。

sandydad 发表于 2013-12-4 07:53:00

写得很有趣, 有两组词可参考一下
to get her new baby==> to giver birth to her new baby

knitted her stomach ==> stitched the wound

lsyes 发表于 2013-12-4 08:01:53

有意思的文章

行者无疆029 发表于 2013-12-4 12:00:30

相当好。。。。

lwsmnly 发表于 2013-12-4 12:17:42

话说我也是好大才知道小孩是可以从那么狭窄的通道出来的。6岁写得生小孩是剖腹产很正常。不过能用英文写出来很不简单。还有妈妈的情绪呢，刻画的很细腻。

qiankun3 发表于 2013-12-4 15:59:07

本帖最后由 qiankun3 于 2013-12-4 16:01 编辑

ACTING THE PART
One day at school, was going to put on a small play, I was very excited.
I wanted to act a big part. So I chose to be the King. The King had a lot of acting parts. I also had a feeling of being King.
But the teacher thought I act too much, so she gave me the part of a soldier. He had only one part! “It is, yes sir.”
I was very disappointed.
When the show was over, asked her why I had such a small part, she said:”because you acted too much.”
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