我读《Writie Source》这套书
本帖最后由 glsy 于 2014-3-31 09:41 编辑女儿二年级了，不管是中文还是英文都开始涉及写作了，所以在网上找这方面的资源，后来看到大家对《Writie Source》这本书的推荐，我就从论坛下了G1和G2的。
看到厚厚的几本书着实吓了一跳，不知道如何下手。还在论坛上发了帖子请教：见
【请教】Write Source怎么用？http://www.ebama.net/forum.php?m ... 4798&fromuid=178873
大家都没有太多经验，索性自己看书了。
自己也没什么经验，只是想理顺一下自己的思路，所以开了一贴，希望给大家一个借鉴吧。 论坛上的一些资源：
1、shirrey 发的出版的“写作教材write source汇总帖”
http://www.ebama.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=176442&fromuid=178873
2、cl2039996 的关于这本书的帖子
“全球顶尖写作教材《Write Source》的编写依据——过程法写作模式”
http://www.ebama.net/forum.php?m ... &fromuid=178873
本帖最后由 glsy 于 2014-2-15 10:11 编辑
=============G1 Student Edit==================
G1我只读了Student Edit这本书，主要是讲了写作的五个步骤及一些类型的文章的写作方法。
我把这五步归纳为“PWREP”。
P——Prewrite：plan
W——Write ：first draft
R—— Revise ：change it better
E—— Edit ：check
P—— Publish：share
第一部分：
具体来说一下这五步：
1、Prewrite：是整理素材的过程，可以理解为准备工作。
|-- Think :想一想你可以写的东西，即：ideas
|--List ：把你的想法列出来
|-- Choose：圈出你要写的主题
|-- Draw：画一下你的想法：可以是图画，可以是列表
2、Write ：Tell about your topic in sentences
|-- Look：
|-- Think :
|-- Write：
3、Revise ：修改的过程：主要是润色词汇，调整句子等
|-- Read：
|-- Listen:
|-- Change：
4、Edit ：也是修改的过程：这步主要是检查“Capital letters, End marks and Spelling”
|-- Read：
|-- Check:
|-- Correct：
5、Publish：加title，重新写好，配图，
|-- Think : 想个title
|-- Write：写下title，配图
|-- Share：
来学习了！ 本帖最后由 glsy 于 2014-3-23 16:02 编辑
第二部分：Sentence和Paragraph
*sentence：一组相关的word组成sentence
*sentence的集合就是paragraph
sentence 要求：1、comlete thought
2、correct order
3、name and tell
paragraph的类型：1、Telling sentence
2、Asking Sentence
3、Exclamatory sentence
End marks:1、period .
2、Question Mark ?
3、Exclamation point!
paragraph组成部分：1、begginning sentence
2、middle sentence
3、ending sentence
怎么写paragraph？(注意这里**还是前面提到的五步法)
prewrite ： choose a topic and gather details
wrtie: draft
revise:change better
edit: check
public 同学，占个地儿，有时间交流。 思想可以借鉴，但愿坛子上资源齐整
资料是好的。感谢楼主分享。 非常不错的总结，继续关注 cl2039996 的关于这本书的帖子
“全球顶尖写作教材《Write Source》的编写依据——过程法写作模式”
http://www.ebama.net/forum.php?m ... &fromuid=178873
请问你有存这个帖子的内容吗？现在打不开了。
应该也有教师用书，楼主可以结合起来看 跟着学习了 过来了解学习一下。。。
来学习了！ wow,学习了 感谢楼主分享
用心的妈妈，很好，谢谢你 好贴！用心的妈妈！ 好资源需要用心学，不然就暴殄天物了～向楼主同志学习！ 好棒哦:loveliness: 没讲完，期待楼主继续呦。 第三部分：Descriptive Writing
**3点：1、think about topic
2、use your sense to get ideas(see, hear, smell,taste, touch)
3、write describing words
**5 step:
1、Prewrite:think, list, choose,gather your detail
2、write: begin:with a sentence that introduces her topic
choose: words from her sensory chart
write: use these words to write sentenses about her topic
==>这样就完成了first draft
3、Revise: change your writing( try to make a clearer picture for the reader)
read , talk ,change
4、Edit: check your writing(主要包括大写字母、结尾的句号以及拼写)
5、Publish: Skip: first line for a title
Indent: bigein of the paragraph
Copy: the rese
Add:A title and a drawing
==>这样就完成了Final copy
本帖最后由 glsy 于 2014-3-24 09:56 编辑
第四部分：Narrative Writing
1、使用的地方
*share a story about something that really happend
*about you or someone else
* a special time
2、personal narrative
* remember one special time and what you did
* use "I" to write about yourself
3、write goal
*ideas: choose one special time to write about
* organization: use time-order words
*conventions:follow the writing rulse
4、five steps
(1)Prewrite: Think :about some special time
Finish: some sentence starters to get ideas
choose: a favorite idea as your topic
gather: your details(draw a map, write , tell)
(2)Write: Begin:with your sentence starter
look: at your story map
Write: a sentence about each pointer
(3)Revise: Change your writing (Use a time-order word:then soon first later next now等)
(4) Edit:Check(Capital letters, end marks, spelling)
(5)Publish:Skip first line ->title
Indent:beginning of a paragraph
Copy: rest sentences in paragraph form
Share:your writing( add a title and a drawing)
本帖最后由 glsy 于 2014-3-25 12:37 编辑
第五部分：Expository Writing
1、使用的地方
* share information about something
* explain how to do something
2、2 points
* think about
* list all the steps in order
3、writing gaol
*idea: think of something you can explain
*organization:put the steps in order
*conventions:Follow the writing rules
4、5 Steps
1）Prewrite:choose a topic
*Think: What could explain
*List:
*choose topic
*gather:your details
2)Write:
*start: with "You can"
*Write:sentences to explain each step
*Use: time-order word(first, second, then, next, after, now)
3)Revise:Change your writing
*Read
*Listen
*Change:Add a missing detail and a feeling word
4)Edit:Capital letters, and marks, spellings
5)Publish
*skip: first line for title
*Indent:begginning of first line
*Copy:rest sentences
*Share:add a title and a draw
本帖最后由 glsy 于 2014-3-27 11:17 编辑
第六部分：Persuasive Writing
1、Start-up
*Decide what your opinion is
*Use the word "Should"
*Try to convince others to agree with you
2、5 Steps
1）Prewrite:choose a topic
*Think: What could explain
*List:
*choose topic
*gather:your details
2)Write:
*start: with "You can"
*Write:sentences to explain each step
*Use: time-order word(first, second, then, next, after, now)
3)Revise:Change your writing
*Read
*Listen
*Change:Add a missing detail and a feeling word
4)Edit:Capital letters, and marks, spellings
5)Publish
*skip: first line for title
*Indent:begginning of first line
*Copy:rest sentences
*Share:add a title and a draw
(后面这些步骤和之前讲的一样) 必须点赞~~:victory: 自己英语不行啊，还不知道如何下手，借鉴下。 太好了，期待后面的:handshake