鹭宝宝刚才才自编写的一首诗
本帖最后由 qiankun3 于 2016-12-25 16:22 编辑9999999999999999999999999999999999999
真利害！不亏是牛娃 别的先不谈，这么大的孩子，很有想法啊……光这个就不错。 真的真的很厉害啊！这么小就可以用英语写诗了！牛！ 作为诗来说，还是应该更讲究押韵和用词。Lu宝写的小说和故事似更胜一筹。 时态上可多加注意一下 词汇贫乏 需要大量阅读拓展 不过Lu 还小 慢慢来 太赞了！强！
扩大阅读面，也许会有帮助进一步提高。 本帖最后由 lintao915 于 2014-5-22 07:49 编辑
时态、单复数、语义不通、词汇贫乏的问题就不说了。这都可以慢慢来。
最奇怪的是这句：Poor people don't have happy families,Because they were very poor，LZ家庭富裕是good good了，可我们祖国1亿多poor people ，几千万poor children情以何堪啊。
如果这就是LZ的教育的话，那恭喜你们家多了一名gold digger 本帖最后由 心月妈妈 于 2014-5-22 08:55 编辑
起点那么高，却因为父母的自负被局限，可惜了好苗子。楼主要是真为孩子好，就找好老师教她吧。 不过楼主一向我行我素，讲也白讲。 心月妈妈 发表于 2014-5-22 08:50 static/image/common/back.gif
起点那么高，却因为父母的自负被局限，可惜了好苗子。楼主要是真为孩子好，就找好老师教她吧。 不过楼主一向 ...
前两天中午鹭鹭在我单位里饭后出食堂时在地上捡了只蚂蚁玩，我要求她写篇诗关于蚂蚁，这是她用时两分钟写的
ANTS
There was an ant，
Who was called Marty.
She was my pet，
She was very smart，
And was very tricky too.
Marty was the smartest Ant I could ever had.
Do you like to have?
Well,ants are very tricky to find,
But don't worry,
You might catch one.
From Lulu
lintao915 发表于 2014-5-22 07:47 static/image/common/back.gif
时态、单复数、语义不通、词汇贫乏的问题就不说了。这都可以慢慢来。
最奇怪的是这句：Poor people don't...
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前两天中午鹭鹭在我单位饭后出食堂时在地上捡了只蚂蚁玩，我要求她写篇诗关于蚂蚁，这是她用时两分钟写的。
ANTS
There was an ant，
Who was called Marty.
She was my pet，
She was very smart，
And was very tricky too.
Marty was the smartest Ant I could ever had.
Do you like to have?
Well,ants are very tricky to find,
But don't worry,
You might catch one.
From Lulu
qiankun3 发表于 2014-5-22 09:35 static/image/common/back.gif
都是你要求孩子写，孩子就听话的去写对么？
或许孩子想表达的，不是我所看到的表面上的那样，毕竟我家小宝说中文都辞不达意。不管如何，才7岁，这种尝试很不错。 刚才饭后鹭鹭写的这首诗，然后去电脑上打关于埃及金字塔的作文
PAINTING AND DRAWING
Do you love painting?
Well, I love painting very much,
Do you love painting?
Do you love drawing?
I really love drawing,
But I love painting even more!
Because painting is much more fun than
Drawing on a piece of paper.
From Lulu
qiankun3 发表于 2014-5-22 13:20 static/image/common/back.gif
刚才饭后鹭鹭写的这首诗，然后去电脑上打关于埃及金字塔的作文
PAINTING AND DRAWING
写完诗，鹭鹭到电脑上才打的小故事
EGYPT
Long, long ago, there was a Queen in Egypt, the Queen was called Marty, Marty lived inside a pyramid, the pyramid had a secret door, only the Queen could open the secret door.
One day, Marty was just going on a picnic, when suddenly, a very, very big black shadow slunk out of the forest, Marty suddenly forgot that it’s Halloween, so she opened the very big pyramids secret door, and went to pick out a costume. After half an hour,
the Queen picked out a fairy costume for Halloween, then she kept on going to the forest to have a picnic, after walking for a while, they felt a little hungry, so they saw a apple tree upon her head, so she called over some Indians to help and get some apples down, now she was full, and head home, she then saw a bread store on the way home, and bought a load of bread which she ate it, and happily went home.
The End
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真利害！不亏是牛娃 露露妈的精神令人自叹弗如，我有疑问的是，如果果真如露露妈所说用英文全对话，那么自然90%以上的时间都用在英语上，那中文学习又如何是好呢？我自认为中国人学好中文比中国人学好英文更重要，最起码要做到一样重要
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