由鹭宝宝写诗想到的，不得不看
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谢谢坛子里的鹭宝宝和勤勤恳恳的鹭爸爸，发上充满生活情趣的小诗。
以为写诗是很难的，but writing a poem is easier than you might think，摘录学生的几篇诗作（学生程度不算好，略高于职高水平，三流高中:(，有几位英语高考150分可能只能30分吧，能写出这样的诗，足以说明写诗与分数一点都不挂钩），发上来的目的，一个是欣赏，但更值得借鉴的是写诗对孩子文化和情调的培养熏陶，写诗让人安心，写诗让人勇敢，写诗让人进入一个新的世界。
如果喜欢，让你的孩子也写写吧~真的很容易！
介绍一下最容易写的英文诗歌形式：Cinquain and List poems
Cinquain is a poem made up of five lines. Look at these examples.
BrotherBeautiful, athleticTeasing, shouting, laughingFriend and enermy tooMine
SummerSleepy, saltyDrying, drooping, dreadingWeek in, week outEndless
特点就是：第一行---主题（名词）；第二行---两个形容词描述主题；第三行---3个形容词描述主题；第四行---四个词，词性没有硬性规定；第五行---回归主题，但要有主题升华，词性不限
List poems are poems that list things, which have a flexible line length and repeated phrases. Some rhyme while others don't.
清单诗，有点像流水账哦~~但是乐趣十足！Look at these examples.
I saw a fish-portal all on fire I saw a fish-pond all on fire, I saw a house bow to a squire, I saw a person twelve-feet high, I saw a cottage in the sky, I saw a balloon made of lead, I saw a coffin drop down dead, I saw two sparrows run a race, I saw two horses making lace, I saw g girl just like a cat, I saw a kitten wear a hat, I saw a man who saw these too, And said though strange they all were true.
Our first football match We would have won ... if Jack had scored that goal, if we'd had just a few more minutes, if we had trained harder, if Ben had passed the ball to Joe, if we'd had thousands of fans screaming, if I hadn't taken my eye off the ball, if we hadn't stayed up so late the night before, if we hadn't taken it easy, if we hadn't run out of energy. We would have won ... if we'd been better!
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Cinquain and list poems written by my Ss in 2014
CinquainPandaCute, lazyHugging, eating, playingFriendly and beautiful tooTreasure(by Wang Binbin) DandelionPretty, lightFloating, flying, glidingJust like a dreamMagical(by Liu Jing) FatherHumorous, considerateWorrying, blaming, caringFriend and teacher tooMine(by Zhu Weier) SpringLively, freshWarming, comforting, growingWakes all things upGreen(by Zheng Qiao) WindGentle, softDancing, wondering, floatingBlow away all unhappinessComfortable(by Sun Yuemei) SchoolBusy, happyStudying, playing, talkingClassmates, teachers and friendsTogether(by Ye Qun) TomorrowMysterious, fantasticAwaiting, approaching, comingEveryone looks forward toEndless (Promising)(by Yu Zhenni) BatmanStrong, quickFlying, shooting, beatingKnock down bad guysHero(by Hu Haoting) List PoemsA Poor Test ResultI would have succeeded…If I had reviewed more carefullyIf I had been calm in the classIf I hadn’t had a cold the night beforeIf I had asked for teachers more oftenI would have succeededIf I’d been hard-working!(by Chen Yutai)
Our Poor EnvironmentWe could have lived in a better environment…If people hadn’t cut down thousands of treesIf people hadn’t wasted so much waterIf people hadn’t drained off so much polluted airIf we had tried to drive cars as less as we couldIf we had managed to protect the animals as many as possibleWe could have lived in a much better environmentIf we had been better!
(by Zhang Yanan)
I remembered the life in the countrysideI remembered the life in the countrysideA large lush woodHardworking farmersBirds singing in the early morningFrogs jumping in the rainButterflies resting on the fragrant flowersI remembered the life in the countryside.(by Zhang Xinyu) If I were a drop of waterIf I were a drop of waterI would jump into the sea playing with fishesI would hide into the cloud watching all citiesI would go to the desert watering the plantsI would knock against the window playing musicI would gather friends together falling from the skyIf I were a drop of water(by Guo Shuying)
贴一个我女儿在猫妈论坛的一个作业, 但我不懂欣赏;P
If a tire goes kaput
the car will be fine with a replacement tire
If a cake is kaput
I don’t think someone will eat it
If a pair of shoes is kaput
That pair of shoes will be thrown away or be mended.
If a painting is ruined
then the painting will be ripped and thrown in the trash
What about our life goes kaput?
Will we fix it?
Will we give up?
Or just give up？
Before our life goes kaput
We have to rescue it
We have to let our life colourful
Let us do something new
Let us see the world in another perspective
and we'll make life better
A brand new world
A brand new life
A brand new yourself.
楼主学生写得很好，学习了。楼主是教高中学生吗？ 很喜欢孩子们写的诗， 如果帖子题目改一下，更贴近主题会更好：） 写诗是挺高大上的。
估计坛子里的孩子们大多数是目前连中文诗也写不出来，英文就更难了 写诗不容易。 其实和中文的诗歌是一样的，就是押韵。 国外对诗很重视，我们刚上的外教写作课，没上几课老师就让写诗了。而且英文诗和我之前想象的完全不一样，颠覆了之前的观念。 It is a very nice topic. 看JBJ上面，一年级就开始写诗了，几个孩子组成一个团队，你一言我一语的就出来一首诗了。
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