女儿试写双语系列童话：Anna's stories安娜的故事
本帖最后由 yaoyao0701 于 2014-7-30 13:41 编辑女儿越来越爱编故事，她很内向平时不爱说话，但只要让她给我编故事，她就停不下来似的没完没了。最近，她选了几个比较完整的故事记下来，告诉我这是一套小说。好吧，就当是吧，看她能写多少{:1_1:}
Anna's stories 1：The disappearingkey消失的钥匙
Anna's stories 2：The living picture图片活了
Anna's stories 3：Anna Vs. Magical snake安娜大战妖蛇
Anna's stories 4：Anna's magic things
Anna's stories5：待续。。。
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Anna'sstories 1：The disappearing key消失的钥匙
Anna is a girl with magic. Around her there are many strange thingshappening.
There are three keys that can open the door in their house. One foreach of her parents and the third key is in their best friend’shouse. Today, the second key in their house disappeared. Everyoneexcept Anna was worried. Because it was actually in the stomach ofthe fish they were going to eat for lunch.
When Mom sliced through the stomach of the fish, she got such asurprise she almost fell backwards! Now everyone knew where the keywas and who did it. The parents were very angry, but Anna and hersister Elsa were hiding in their bedroom, laughing until theirstomachs hurt.
消失的钥匙
安娜是一个有魔法的小女孩，她周围总是有一些奇怪的事情发生。
家里有三把钥匙，爸爸妈妈各一把。他们家其实还有第三把钥匙，放在了最好的朋友家作为备用钥匙。可是今天妈妈的那把钥匙怎么也找不到了，这很愁人，只好让爸爸到朋友家取回来了备用钥匙。这时妈妈在厨房里做饭，当妈妈把鱼肚剖开时竟然发现了那把丢失的钥匙。钥匙已经脏兮兮的，全家人都觉得很奇怪。
原来是安娜搞的一个恶作剧，她正躲在卧室里哈哈大笑。
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Anna's stories 2：The livingpicture图片活了
One Saturday, Anna and her family went out to play as they didevery weekend. The difference was this time they were going muchmore farther than normal. Except doing homework, they didn’t domuch but play. The best part was that there was a fair near thehotel and a playground. The girls were so excited they couldn’tbelieve their ears: a fair and a play ground! In the fair there wasa toy store that held toys which not anyone could know how it wasmade.
Both girls wanted the same toy, and even their parents stared atit. It was a pure white unicorn with an elegant fairy on its back.The fairy had a pair of blue butterfly wings. Because it was somarvelous it was also worth a lot of money. Even if both Anna andElsa put all their allowance together, they couldn’t buy the partof unicorn which they both wanted most.
As soon as the family arrived to the hotel, Anna drew the unicornand the fairy on top. It was practically the same as the real toyexcept that she changed the blue wings into pink. The otherdifference was that she gave the unicorn a golden bridle, completewith wings of the same color as the fairy wings. When she hadfinished the whole thing, she went to sleep immediately. Shedreamed that the fairy and also the unicorn were flying towardsher.
The next morning Anna woke up finding the picture was a real thing,not a picture. Not believing it was real, Anna slowly reached totry touching the unicorn. Surprised, Anna found the unicornstepping backward as if afraid. Only now she believed the unicornand the fairy were real. From now on Anna had a new friend, Lilythe fairy and a unicorn to ride on.
图片活了
周末安娜、艾莎和爸爸妈妈一起出去玩，可是这个周末和平时出去玩不太一样。今天他们要到较远的地方去玩，还要住在酒店，通常只有到寒暑假才有这样的待遇。下午，他们在参观一家玩具店时，大家的目光都聚集在了一个玩具上。这是一只雪白雪白的独角兽，背上有一个漂亮的仙女，仙女的背上长着一双美丽的蓝色翅膀。安娜和艾莎都很喜欢这个玩具，可这是一个非常精致的玩具，自然价格也很贵，姐妹俩的全部零花钱加在一起都不够独角兽的那部分。
回到酒店时，安娜立刻拿出纸和笔，按照记忆中的玩具画了一个一模一样的。她还给独角兽加了一条银色的缰绳，在安娜的想像中，银色的缰绳还闪闪发光呢，这非常配独角兽纯白色的皮毛。画完仙女时也该睡觉了，这天晚上安娜做了一个梦，她梦见独角兽活了，仙女牵着独角兽向她走来。
当安娜醒来，惊奇的发现独角兽和仙女真的活了。她不敢相信地慢慢伸手去摸摸独角兽，独角兽似害怕的往后退了一步。这下安娜才真的相信独角兽是真的活了。从此，安娜又拥有了一个朋友—-小仙女莉莉，还有一匹会飞的马—-也就是独角兽小白。
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Anna’s stories 3: Anna Vs. Magicalsnake安娜大战妖蛇
One afternoon, Anna and her friends were playing in a park near theschool. Suddenly a snake crawled out from the bushes. It had asmall yellow horn between the red eyes, and two stripes on thesides of the horn. The first one was blue, the next one was violet.On the snake’s tail was an sword. The snake shot around trying tobite someone. When Anna saw the snake she knew it must bepoisonous. There wouldn’t be such a snake even in the encyclopedia.Anna yelled：“Back to school and lock the door!”Everyone ran back toschool, leaving Anna and the snake in the park. Because they knewAnna would probably deal with the snake easily.
Anna used the best magical fire she was able to use by then. Butwhen the snake’s head burned off, it immediately grew back, and nowthe snake had two heads. The snake was furious. It opened it’smouths and shot towards Anna, so Anna also went back to school.Then Anna took out something like a small watch which could signalto Lily to let her come to Anna(Lily had the other one).
Lily did come. After Anna had told Lily what the snake looked like,Lily said:“This is a snake with magic power. You can’t kill it byjust cutting down its head. You must shoot it’s heart at once. Ifnot only once, you will not kill the snake at all. In the past, Iwas friends with the sun god Apollo. We can go to borrow his bowand arrows. ”Anna quickly brought back the bow and arrows. Thesearrows have a magic power, which is no matter where you want it toshoot, it will go there.
Because the bow and arrows were very heavy, Anna and Lily pulledthe bow together. They thought: The arrow must shoot into thesnake’s heart. Then they saw the arrow shoot towards the snake. Thesnake tried to run away, but the magical arrow followed the snakewherever the snake ran, and was much more quicker than the snake.The arrow shot into the snake’s heart at once. No wonder Lily saidthe snake had magic, even it’s blood is black!
For now, everyone is safe. Maybe afterwards there will be othermagical monsters.
安 娜大战妖蛇
下午，安娜和同学们课间到操场上来玩。这时，忽然从树丛里冒出了一条蛇。它的两只眼睛之间有一个像独角兽似的小黄角，角的两边还各有两条条纹。前面一条是蓝色的，后面一条是红色的。蛇的尾巴上还有一个箭头形的小刺。那条蛇直向同学们蹿，准备咬他们。大家惊慌失措。安娜喊：“赶紧跑回教室，把门锁好！”这是因为在安娜看来，这蛇肯定有毒，就算是百科全书里也没见过长得这么奇怪的蛇。
安娜把她目前为止学到的最厉害的一种火焰魔法使出来，将那条蛇的脑袋给烧掉了。不料，那蛇的脑袋又长了回来，而且现在竟然变成了两个头。蛇被惹急了，它立即向安娜扑了过来。安娜跑进学校，关上校门。然后她到学校的小操场，掏出兜里的一个特制的小信号器，用信号器向莉莉呼救。
莉莉果然来了，在安娜给她描述了一下那条蛇大致的模样后，莉莉说：“这是一个拥有邪恶魔法的妖蛇，必须一次性射中它的心脏才能杀死它，我们要立刻处理掉这条蛇。以前，在天上的时候，太阳神阿波罗和我是好朋友，我们可以去他那里借一下他的箭。”安娜很快取来了神箭，这只箭有个奇妙之处，就是你想让它射到什么地方，它就一定会命中。
因为弓箭很重，安娜和莉莉一起拉开弓弦，心里默念：一定要射中妖蛇的心脏。只见这只神箭“嗖！”的一下射出，那只蛇想跑，可是箭追着它跑，而且比它快得多，一下射中了蛇心。死前，那蛇挣扎了几下就不动了。怪不得莉莉说这是一条妖蛇，它流出的竟然是黑血！
现在同学们暂时是安全了，不知道以后会不会还出现 讨厌的妖精。
坛里牛娃真多, 很棒呀 写的真好． 遥遥真是厉害呀！小才女！ 真棒，这么小就开始写了 遥遥真是小才女！ 遥遥啊{:76:} 本帖最后由 yaer2002cn 于 2014-5-25 22:07 编辑
很想说一段话，但我不能说、、、
只能说：其实我还是很喜欢看晒娃的、、、
好样的遥遥，好样的妈
灿祥07 发表于 2014-5-25 21:03 static/image/common/back.gif
遥遥啊
原来遥遥妈当初在给孩子起名的时候，就远见啊。这个遥，就跑的遥遥领先
不知道现在改名，还能改不
写的真好啊 来仰望牛蛙的来了。 牛娃就是牛。 聪明可爱的美遥遥, 遥遥领先我的女儿! 请问一下，你家娃把故事写下来，还是口述，你帮她记？我家娃是口述，我帮着记录。
xypexy 发表于 2014-5-26 09:49 static/image/common/back.gif
请问一下，你家娃把故事写下来，还是口述，你帮她记？我家娃是口述，我帮着记录。
遥小时也是口述我来写，但我英语实在差，她说的词我不会拼的越来越多，她总给我念字母大家觉得烦，我就让她自己打字了。孩子们练打字都很快的，一天十分钟，不用两周肯定会。之后多练练，很快就能自己写了。现在她还会自己写写文章不让我看的。
好好培养，以后一定是个小作家。 最近一直在爬遥遥博客 遥遥很了不起 加油哦 会一直关注的 牛娃呀。
写的真棒。
支持一下。 进来学习啦 一直觉得女儿英文阅读量大带动了中文理解力。中文虽然没看过绘本，直接从章节书开始中文阅读，但这一年多的大量阅读让她的中文写作能力应该说也不差的。没想到前天开家长会，班里的小朋友看图作文已经有轻松写300字以上的，一年级的孩子在我看来，女儿写150字已经不错。真是人外有人，山外有山。怪不得女儿总说她的中文不够好，原来是我这只井底之蛙见识短浅了。:L 真不错！进来鼓掌！我闺女只读不吐。平时话少内向的孩子。能写篇ORT体我就很开心了。爱好写作一定要鼓励！ 女儿网站因为没备案被停了，说是要二十个工作日才能恢复。直接把故事贴上来了吧。 Anna's stories 4:Anna’s magic things
Anna had three magic things, except the potions.
The first one is the Magic Carpet. Anna can either sit on it, tell the carpet where she wants to go and the carpet takes her there, or she tells the carpet to go home and get something, then the carpet brings it. But the carpet can only be used to bring small things; it can't bring very big things. If it’s too big, she can sit on the carpet and go back to get it.
The second one is the Air Box. The air box contains two kinds of air. The box has two halves. The top half holds warm air, the bottom half contains cold air. There is a small door with a lock on it. In summer Anna puts hot air in the top half, in winter she puts cold air in the bottom half. Anna can let out either kind of air so to use it like an air conditioner.
The third one is called the Wind Maker. It can either make hot wind, cold wind or normal wind. But unlike the Air box, the wind maker makes the wind very hot or very cold. The wind maker is used for attacking. Cold wind can freeze an enemy. Hot wind can set fire to the enemy. The normal wind can blow the enemy away. Anna made the wind maker very special so it wouldn't blow away something they needed. For example, their wand, the unicorn, etc. The normal wind blows something away just like the clover blows away the fog in the game Plants vs. Zombies. The cold wind freezes things like a refrigerator, except that the cold wind freezes something immediately. The hot wind has another use. Anna can set fire to something. For example she can set fire in to a stick and throw anything but ice into the fire. When she throws something through the fire it will immediately set fire to the enemy and hit the enemy at same time. If Anna’s lucky it might even set fire to the enemy's head and kill it. 太厉害了！
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