请帮忙改英文小短文，谢谢
Hello,I’m Dylan,I’m nine years old,I like science and robot.Now,I will tell you a story.Hippos at the zoo
One day,Lucie and her Mum go to the zoo,they see a pool,near the pool,there is a hippo,it’s skin covers with mud.Then they ask the zoo keeper,why the hippos like mud,the zoo keeper said:”the hippoes don’t like the flies and mosquitoes,when they are in the mud,the flies and mosquites can’t bite them.”Lucie write them on the computer.She and her Mum said:”thank you,we learned a lot of animals.”The zoo keeper say good-bye back to them.
Thank you!
他要举行的比赛，一个很小的短文，四张图，打乱顺序，就是有公园，有河马，有ZOO KEEPER。这是他说我给他记的，但里面是不是有很多错误啊，请帮忙改正，谢谢！ 时态最好统一用一般过去时。 thank you,we learned a lot of animals
learn about 迷惑了看似简单还不会改了 Now, I am going to tell you a story. 改后如下：
Hello, I am Dylan, I am nine years old. I like science and robots.
Now I will tell you a story. The story is called "Hippos at the zoo."
One day Luscie and her mum went to the zoo. They saw a pool. Near the pool there was a hippo. It's skin was covered with mud. Then they asked the zookeeper why hippos like mud. The zookeeper said " Hippos don't like flies ormosquitoes. When they are in the mud, the flies and the mosquitoes can't bite them."
Lucie wrote this down onher computer. She and her mum said " Thank you, we learned a lot about animals."
The zookeeper said "goodbye"back to them.
The end.
Thank you! 你好，请问是泡泡风采大赛B组复试吗？你们是不是西安赛区的？ 我们今天才拿到的作文题目，下周三就要比赛了，你们不是三个题目需要抽签决定讲那个吗？我英语一般写不出来，请问一下，另外两个有没有写好的，借鉴一下:P
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