浅浅在路上2012 发表于 2015-10-12 23:23:14

第一篇作文： hamsters

    Yesterday afternoon, I bought three hamsters with my mother. They are cute and small.They have a round body and a very short tail. One hamster is yellow and the others are white. The yelllow hamster looks like a yellow ball. So, I give him a name (as) yellow ball. One white hamster is very lazy. I give him a name (as) lazy boy. One white hamster can ran very fast. I give him a name (as) white sword.

They can drink water by themselves.They can sleep by themselves. Once I hold yellow ball in my hand, he bited my finger. He may thought that my finger was food too.

I take care of these hamsters everyday. I play with them everyday. They are my friends. They are my family. I love them.




   儿子的第一篇英语作文，语言有点啰嗦，有些句子连接也比较生硬。做为练手第一步，值得鼓励。终于能动笔了，加油。

evaspring 发表于 2015-10-13 09:06:23

太厉害了!!

yl.zheng 发表于 2015-10-13 09:24:43

挺通顺的，厉害！

chenhezheng 发表于 2015-10-13 09:57:16

写的挺好的呀

浅浅在路上2012 发表于 2015-10-13 10:27:10

本帖最后由 浅浅在路上2012 于 2015-10-13 10:36 编辑

孩子比较懒，一直不太愿意动手写单词或句子。昨晚下楼散步，我问他，既然这么喜欢小仓鼠，你和我描绘下吧。他说的时候，我用手机录下来了。回家后，鼓励他，既然都说出来了，你就写在纸上吧。因为他用的都是简单的单词，所以写的也很顺。过后，还和我说，妈妈，看来写话不难。我们家大童晚起步，只能这样一步步引导他了。现在就是后悔前几年没跟他的英语，错过了最好的时机。

amanda米宝 发表于 2015-10-13 14:27:09

太棒了,怎么做到的,每天怎么做才能变的这么好,我们家的英语还没真正开始学

浅浅在路上2012 发表于 2015-10-17 08:05:00

每天大约坚持一个钟头作于的听力输入，利用早上早起的时间和临睡前的时间。汪2 14本阅读完成，现在开始汪3第三阶段桥梁书，感觉the boxcar children 难度低，打算作为入门的初章。另外，每天让他记一小段话。咱家大童，必须开始写了

bluecroco 发表于 2015-10-26 08:25:54

你家孩子教得好，我们还没有入门。
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