zhaojinrui 发表于 2017-1-2 13:27:04

2017 Jerry开始一句话日记，欢迎大家来批改！

想让儿子学会写日记，妈妈我不会批改，大家有空帮忙批改！
2017.1.1
Today is New Year's Day, MY dad , Mum and I go to my grandma's house , there is a horse farm near my grandma's house ,
I am waiting toride a little horse. It's my turn now, I ride slowly first , then the little horse run faster and faster.
I think I'm flying in the sky. I am very happy today.


安宁的 发表于 2017-1-2 18:09:21

很好的选择哈！我们也要开始了

longlong3310 发表于 2017-5-12 15:09:07

需要避免中国式的英语表述
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