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四年级女儿突发奇想想要开始写故事,妈妈表示强烈支持。先贴第一章。


The Original Orangutan

By Lisa Shi (石静淇)

Chapter 1 : What Happened???

“SCCCRRREEEECCCHHHH!” I suddenly woke up, surprised and wondering who made such a racket. Then I realized it was my friend Millie the Monkey who made the racket.

My name is Olivia, Olivia the Orangutan. I live in an enormous enclosure with my friends Millie the Monkey, Sally the Spider Monkey and Gigi, the Gold Tamarin Monkey (who is apparently ‘endangered’ like me, whatever that means.)

I then started my daily routine, eating, playing, climbing and sleeping.

First, I went to The Brekkie Table to get some good grub
there’s nothing better than some good beetles and fruit in the morning! But, to my surprise, there were no left! I was so conbaffled (confused and baffled) that they didn’t save any for me !  

I was actually on a diet, so I just nibbled on some larvae shells and some watermelon skin. Yum! After that breakfast fiasco, I went to play with my absolute best friend, Gigi. I found her swinging on some jungle tree vines, (scented to smell just like home).

I asked, “Hey Gigi, do you know where the other monkeys are?”

Gigi said,” I think they’re over there somewhere playing on the banana treat house, probably nicking some bananas.”

“Thanks Gigi!” I say, as I start to head off to the banana treat house. Sure enough , there they were! But they weren’t swinging on vines, or hanging on trees, nor stealing bananas! Strange behavior if you ask me.

I climbed up to the top of the Treat House, and I saw a strange sight, they were sitting around on a grey platform, some were whining , some were crying.

Poor them! I thought. I hopped over to them hoping to see what was happening.

未完待续
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  • 阿春1008

    2018-3-2 09:35:13 使用道具

    写的非常好,以我有限的英语水平看来,非常地道。
  • salinamao

    楼主 2018-3-2 09:42:26 使用道具

    谢谢,女儿在国外读四年级
  • bill2015

    2018-3-2 10:13:58 使用道具

    太厉害了!
  • yaer2002cn

    2018-3-2 10:14:45 使用道具

    我看不懂哩。
    但凡只要孩子写出来,写得多多的,我就觉得厉害
    比我家姑娘同期要厉害多了
  • zhaozhy2001

    2018-3-2 11:03:33 使用道具

    英文写的不错,母语水平呗。中文能写嘛?能写也贴一个?
  • salinamao

    楼主 2018-3-2 17:15:33 使用道具

    中文写不好,在努力。
  • syhsh2006

    2018-3-7 02:35:30 使用道具

    我家六年级也学不出来
  • 阳光下的猫

    2018-3-13 12:15:00 使用道具

    好厉害啊。
  • peter爸

    2019-8-24 07:01:20 使用道具

    受教了。谢谢分享。
  • Giant

    2019-8-25 13:03:20 使用道具

    才女。
  • crystal19821

    2019-9-27 10:37:52 使用道具

    谢谢分享,正需要