瑞希妈 发表于 2021-6-22 11:13:21

通过哈利波特体会写作技巧

在疫情期间,孩子开始接触哈利波特,通过听书,阅读和电影结合方式过了一遍哈利波特,可以看我之前整合的资源总结带娃趣读哈利波特,哈利波特的一些背景知识和评论https://www.ebama.net/thread-347636-1-1.html这个暑假 准备进一步了解和体会一些写作手法和技巧,这是我做的计划表,分目标列出了相应的时间和文章段落,段落只是选取了一些片段,目的是体会写作的手法,从而起到抛砖迎玉的目的。书里的页数对应人民文学出版社出的哈利波特英汉对照版。
暑期哈利波特阅读计划表
日期阅读目标具体文章
6.28-7.4 7.5-7.11 Aims:To learn how to explode a moment.Exploding a moment is when you take the most important moment in a piece of writing and slow it down. In other words, you describe it with tons of details.Easy to do tips: To show, don’t tell.Description of Mr Dursley and Mrs Dursley in P6 Book oneDescription of Albus Dumbledore and Professor Mcgonagall in P16 Book oneDescription of Hagridin P24 Book oneDescription of sorrow when facing Dumbledore’s death in 582 book seven
7.12-7.18 7.19-7.25 7.26-8.1 Aims: To learn how to make your writing suspenseful.The oldest and strongest kind of fear is fear of the unknown. Writers harness the fear not by revealing horrors, but by leaving the audience hanging in anticipation of them. That is in a state of suspense.Easy to do tips: Setting up a question and delaying the answer while maintaining their interest and keeping them guessing. The dark secret that causes Snape so much pain in P202 book one and P988 in book seven.How they get involved in finding Nicolas Flamel in P286 book one.Find out who killed Ginny in book twoFind out who put Harry’s name into the cup in book four
8.2-8.88.9-8.15 Aims: To learn how to write humor in your writing.The secret to humor is surprise or incongruity.Trying making connections.Trying to change from‘what is’into ‘what if’. Every thing is funny as long as it happens to somebody else. Thinking of something that irritate, frustrate or humiliate us in real life.Who---funny archetypes( the know it all; the lovable loser; the bad boss; the neurotic; the airhead)What --- find the flaw, then play it up or play with the opposite. The smartest guy does the stupidest thing or the doofus outwits the brainiac.Easy to do tips: zig zig zagTry setting up an expected pattern: zig zigThen flip it:zagHow Dudley had leapt back with howls of horror while the boa constrictor’s tank had vanished. P44 in book oneHow Dudley got pig’s tail.P88 in book oneThe description of the first met of the trio.P156 in book oneFind out how aunt became a balloon In book three
8.16-8.22 8.23-8.31 Aims: To learn how to write descriptivelyEasy to do tips: 5 sensesFigure of speech:metaphor,personificationDescription of cold weatherP286 book one( vision/sound/feel)Description of shell cottage in P752 book seven (vision/sound/smell)

jessbei 发表于 2021-6-22 11:20:12

这个有点牛。

Mao96 发表于 2021-6-22 12:11:47

这个怎么进行?有兴趣。是文字交流么?

Mao96 发表于 2021-6-22 12:11:47

这个怎么进行?有兴趣。是文字交流么?

Mao96 发表于 2021-6-22 12:11:47

这个怎么进行?有兴趣。是文字交流么?

shylly 发表于 2021-6-22 16:28:04

看起来不错呢
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