为乐队写的英语歌词
本帖最后由 Elizabeth 于 2014-3-28 11:37 编辑读读看，押韵的，还要让同学谱曲，写了好几首，放几首上来。我们是初中生。会谱曲的也是英语很好的小孩，他还很挑剔的，我们不得不写好几首让他挑。
1.Thanks！
Last winter I was alone
Huddling myself on the street beyond
Watching the snow covered the freezing ground
And I lost myself in the Christmas song
I was wishing that one day
All those loneliness would be replaced
I would keep it out of my way
And found one beloved soul mate
Winter is round the corner
I took out all my belongings for the chill weather
The next day I recognized you for some matter
So I swore it's gonna be a better winter
There you stand in front of me
Telling me that you would agree
Thanks (repeat)
For all the wishes you grant
For all the time we spent
For all your gent
And for all the winter that's gonna be brilliant!
2. I can forget it 这篇已被谱曲的小子否定，他说太复杂了{:soso_e118:}，放上来看看，要不就白写了。
Evening rush with a plug in my hand
Ringing singing among the sound of the fan
Imagining you're with me when the song began
King-sized love was locked under a chain
And the loneliness spreads over the sheets on my mind
Valentines drifted away and you were so kind
End up believing that you are the one
Right then you were starting to run
All of us were under the sun
You were smiling while I was sobbing
Vanity made me stand up laughing
Everyone knew that I was acting
Then Why are you saying that you know nothing
Things just turn out to be complicated
Even the smallest thing has been ruined just as I estimated
Eavesdropping you when you're not staring
Vote for you means not cherishing
And then you're outside banging
I'll let you know that you're not worth it
Nothing else I can do except being it
Soundtrack ends and I can forget it.
3. A Day of Dull
I read and read and read today
So there's really nothing to say
I was expecting to receive a sweet taste
But found myself lost in the darkening grey
And no there's nothing to say
It's all gone and it's too late
I never felt so dull and so daze
yet it's about to over in the setting ray
Who says
Who says to live life with pure gay
Who says to spend time with given fate
Who says I'm not bored, this time this day
So there you debate
That I have no right to blame the fate
Yet I was not going to blame
It's all life's fault, to create a boring day
You can be happy in so many ways
But I'm sorry I can't catch up life's rate
I'm gonna do it my own way
And that's how a dully day's made
I read and read and read today
So there's really nothing, nothing left to say
我是沙发{:soso_e100:} 一个字：强。 真不错！
厉害的娃啊………… 好厉害的娃儿~ 厉害，等谱好了曲，别忘了录一段给我们听听哈{:soso_e113:}{:soso_e179:} 哇，现在的孩子真是厉害啊。 我们小时候就是和大家一样从Phonics慢慢学上来的，每个孩子都有机会这样，就看我们给他们什么样的学习方法了：） 好棒的孩子！ 太厉害了吧，弱弱的问下，Phonics是什么？
我家宝宝14个多月，我也是刚加入爸妈网来充电的。
abc111 发表于 2011-11-2 14:49 static/image/common/back.gif
太厉害了吧，弱弱的问下，Phonics是什么？
我家宝宝14个多月，我也是刚加入爸妈网来充电的。
Phonics 就是自然拼读，不过我们没有用自然拼读的教材，是直接在阅读书上学的。 很厉害的孩子，父母功不可没啊~~~ 国内英文的路子不对的。我们和我朋友的小孩都不是国内英文路子学出来的孩子，学校老师不理解他们连单词不背，语法不学，是怎么拿高分的。 你们是怎么学的，都这么厉害？ 好强大！楼主能否就你孩子学习英文路子做一个详细的贴，让我们可以好好学习下，拿点可以借鉴的好东西，以便少走弯路。
ramaomao于2011-11-16 09:32补充以下内容：
楼主说的语法不学，我还可以理解，但单词不背是什么概念？ 太厉害了，强大啊 本帖最后由 Elizabeth 于 2011-11-16 12:25 编辑
我喜欢这首
How could I
Remember when I hugged you in the darkness last time
My heart became tight but so pleased inside
Remember when I sat next to you, side by side
I was eager though, to hear your reply
Donno if one day all those beautiful memories would die
It was never too late to give it a try
So how could I,
How could I betray you even we walk a fragil line
How could I blame on you but when you seem so right
How could I feel regret, for the cost of these time
But how could I not cry, trust you every time
Remember when you with me in the parking lot that night
Ididn't know what to do in the dim light
Remember when you made me smile and gave me surprise
I felt glad to have you in my mind
Donno if one day all those beautiful memories would die
It was never too late to give it a try
So how could I
How could I fail you because you're always mine
How could I lose you not until the deadline
How could I hate you even if it was all a lie
But how could I not cry 好厉害的孩子！榜样 牛娃啊！ 这个实在是太厉害了 真棒！看了孩子写的，才能体会楼主讲的英文好到底是啥级别啊。原来不在国外上学，不在国际学校读书，孩子的水平居然也能这么强啊，不光是接轨啊，是优异生的水平啊！也难怪楼主舌战群雄那么费劲啊，大家争的讲的不是一个数量级的事儿呀。 不是每个中国人都会写诗、写歌词。
这么小的娃能用英文写歌词，达到这种水平，真的是很强大啦。
楼主多介绍些经验吧。 现在已经不写这样的了。这是一个阶段一个阶段的，现在自己推翻，写更成熟的东西去了。
真棒 厉害的孩子！ 厉害啊，学习
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