菲林 发表于 2012-2-2 22:54:32

penelope 第20集Grandpa’s birthday

本帖最后由 菲林 于 2012-2-2 22:59 编辑

20. Grandpa’s birthday
Lala….mum looks like she is in a good mood.
Mum? I am hungry.
Just a second, penolope. I am preparing for a party.
Party?
It’s grandpa’s birthday today.
Grandpa’s birthday ?
Look, Penelope. This is the present for grandpa.
Present? What’s inside?
Do you have to wait until grandpa comes?
I see. I forgot a great idea.
What is it?
I won’t tell you.
What is the great idea? Can you guess?
I am going to give grandpa a present too. I will give him my sweets. I hope he likes them.
Ahh? It’s empty. Oh, I ate them yesterday.
You are careless, Penelope?
Oh, that’s right! Grandpa loves hats. Maybe this is too small. How about mine? I will have to repack.
Oh, no. The woolly hat is being on ruffled (不确定)
Oh, what happened?
That’s not good to gift to grandpa.
What can I gift him? Oh, I can draw a picture of grandpa. That’s great! He will love it. Grandpa has a kind of round face. Round, round, nice face. His isn’t pointy. Ahh? Do they look like this? His nose is also round shape. Oh, so cute! Next is eyes. Smiling, smiling, finished!
Hello, Penelope!
Oh, grandpa! Grandpa!
Have you been a good girl?
Yes.
So let’s celebrate grandpa’s birthday together.
Oh, yes.
Happy birthday grandpa!
Oh, thank you!
What is it?
Nice pullover.
I have a present too.
This is for you.
A present from you?
Yes! Happy birthday grandpa!
Thank you!
Wow, what a lovely picture!
Did I draw it well?
Yes, very well done. It looks like exactly like you which 不确定very cute.
Oh, is it supposed to be her?
Oh, I will put this in my room. Then I could see you everyday.
Grandpa is very happy. Penelope is also very happy.
Cheers to grandpa. Yes!
Birthday party is fun. Aren’t they Penelope? (不确定,为什么要用复数?)
这一集写完了,有些地方总觉得怪怪的,不知道是不是听错了,欢迎大家多提意见。

心情小雨 发表于 2012-2-3 10:30:26

我来了 哈哈 你好快呀

心情小雨 发表于 2012-2-3 10:39:54

本帖最后由 心情小雨 于 2012-2-4 20:38 编辑

有几处异议,标出来大家探讨

20. Grandpa’s birthday
Lala….mum looks like she is in a good mood.
Mum? I am hungry.
Just a second, penolope. I am preparing for a party.
Party?
It’s grandpa’s birthday today.
Grandpa’s birthday ?
Look, Penelope. This is the present for grandpa.
Present? What’s inside?
Do you have to wait until grandpa comes?
I see. I 'v got a great idea.
What is it?
I won’t tell you.
What is her great idea? Can you guess?
I am going to give grandpa a present too. I will give him my sweets. I hope he'll like them.
Ahh? It’s empty. Oh, I ate them yesterday.
You are careless, Penelope?
Oh, that’s right! Grandpa loves hats. Maybe this is too small. How about mine? I will have to repack.(这个有疑问,但我不确定是哪个词所以没改)
Oh, no. The woolly hat is being on ruffled (我听到也是这个)
Oh, what happened?
That’s not good to give to grandpa.
What can I give him? Oh, I can draw a picture of grandpa. That’s great! He will love it.
Grandpa has a kind of round face.
Round, round, nice face. His isn’t pointy. Ahh? Do they look like this? His nose is also round shaped(好像听到有d). Oh, so cute! Next is eyes. Smiling, smiling away, finished!
Hello, Penelope!
Oh, grandpa! Grandpa!
Have you been a good girl?
Yes.
So let’s all celebrate grandpa’s birthday together.
Oh, yes.
Happy birthday grandpa!
Oh, thank you!
What is it?
Nice pullover.
I have a present too.
This is for you.
A present from you?
Yes! Happy birthday grandpa!
Thank you!
Wow, what a lovely picture!
Did I draw it well?
Yes, very well done. It looks like exactly like you which 不确定very cute.
Oh, is it supposed to be her?
Oh, I will put this in my room. Then I can see you everyday.
It tickles
Grandpa is very happy. Penelope is also very happy.
Cheers to grandpa. Yes!
Birthday party is fun. Aren’t they Penelope?

这一集,有几处没听出来的菲林听出来了,向你学习!

菲林 发表于 2012-2-3 15:09:16

本帖最后由 菲林 于 2012-2-3 15:20 编辑

I see. I 'v got a great idea. 写的时候我还奇怪,她一般都是i got,这次怎么换成forgot 了,呵呵
That’s not good to give to grandpa. What can I give him? 这两个我本来写的也是give,但是听着好像又像又带个尾音,give常用,那还是换成give好了。
round shaped 和round shape字典两个词的解释完全一样
smiling away怎么解释呢?我听着有点像 smiling always
别的改动都同意。大家相互学习,我我没听出来的你们听出来了啊,我觉得听写真是个提高听力的好办法,呵呵。

TEDDY33 发表于 2012-2-3 17:49:27

学习了。我补充一小点呵。ThenI can see you every day.之后Penelope还有一句台词:It tickles.

TEDDY33 发表于 2012-2-3 17:56:06

Next is eyes. Smiling, smiling away
这里我听到的也好象是smiling away.不过想想用always 好象更说得通。这地方先存疑。Next iseyes. 我听着好象有一个to 的音:Next is to eyes。

心情小雨 发表于 2012-2-4 20:45:16

菲林 发表于 2012-2-3 15:09 static/image/common/back.gif
I see. I 'v got a great idea. 写的时候我还奇怪,她一般都是i got,这次怎么换成forgot 了,呵呵
That’ ...

是呀,普通听听觉得都懂,等要听写的时候却发现,很多细节用词之前都没听仔细。
我想孩子听这个也是这样的,我不要求他听细节,能听懂整个片子讲什么就行了
另外,查了一下字典,smile away 是“一笑了之”的意思,恩

菲林 发表于 2012-2-5 16:47:46

心情小雨 发表于 2012-2-4 20:45 static/image/common/back.gif
是呀,普通听听觉得都懂,等要听写的时候却发现,很多细节用词之前都没听仔细。
我想孩子听这个也是这样 ...

小米看电视的时候我不解释,不过事前会让他熟悉一下重点词,这样他看起来会觉得里面的内容很熟悉,更容易接受。

dragon1978 发表于 2012-2-5 22:15:34

心情小雨 发表于 2012-2-3 10:39 static/image/common/back.gif
有几处异议,标出来大家探讨

20. Grandpa’s birthday


有两句这样对不对呢?

I will have to repack it.
It looks like exactly like you which is very cute.

对着你们听记的仔细听听就容易多了。自己听写,觉得自己好慢。根本来不及写啊。向你们学习。it tickles.我都不知道tickles的意思。学习了。

carol_123321 发表于 2012-2-12 20:51:18

向你们学习了!我就直接拿来用了

牛崽酷 发表于 2012-2-15 19:34:14

继续进来学习

baozimm 发表于 2012-4-2 14:07:11

I hope he'll like them这里,听着更像是i hope you'll like them

wja-tj 发表于 2012-5-8 11:13:08

直接拿走喽

yushi_xuefei 发表于 2012-7-11 21:40:56

一起讨论:
1)I will have to repack.(这个有疑问,但我不确定是哪个词所以没改)
   I will have to wrap it.
2)Next is eyes
    我听的是 next his eyes

londianxc 发表于 2012-7-11 22:03:12

路过,学习一下。

fbk 发表于 2012-7-25 07:38:32

我怎么听着第一句似乎是Mum looks like she has a good news.

queenie_home 发表于 2012-11-30 15:09:59

用心的妈妈们,辛苦了。我厚着脸皮拿走了~~{:soso_e117:}

queenie_home 发表于 2012-11-30 15:39:29

本帖最后由 queenie_home 于 2012-11-30 15:40 编辑

探讨一下:
on ruffled 这里是否应该是unwrapped

刚查到unwrap有散开的意思

小CICI 发表于 2014-11-27 11:44:27

感谢各位妈妈们,辛苦了!
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