心情小雨 发表于 2012-2-8 13:48:52

Penelope 22集 Milo and Madeline

本帖最后由 心情小雨 于 2012-2-8 13:50 编辑

昨 Dragon 发了21集，我受到了鞭策 于是赶紧写了22集 发上来看看另外 23集也是我的，你们表抢哈 22.Milo and Madeline Someone's at the door.Yes. Just a moment please.Oh!Godness me! They look exactly the same.Mile and Madeline!Hello! Hello!Hello, Penelope!Hello, It is Penelope's auntie Mary Cesarine and her twin cousin Milo and Madeline.It nice to see you both.En..Which one is Mile and which one is Madeline?Yeah! Let's play. Let's play.En..Let's play hide and seek.Yeah! Let's play hide and seek.Where are they?They're playing hide and seek.Penelope is trying to find Milo and Madeline.Ah, got you, Milo.No, I'm not Milo, I'm Madeline.I'm Milo.Oh. I made a mistake.They're drawing pictures now.I'v got some biscuits for you. Wash your hands fast all right?Ok.Can you see what Milo and Madeline are drawing?That's funny. It's Milo's face.No, this is Madeline.This is Milo.Even their pictures look the same.This is just like Madeline.This is just like Milo.Wait, biscuits. biscuits.Very good. Very good!I'll have some too.Wasn't she suppose to do something before eating the biscuits? Do you remember what it was?They are very good.Yeah!Oh, I forgot to wash my hands.You mustn't forget Penelope.Now they're playing with wooden blocks.This is very tall. Very tall. Let's make it taller.Wow! Make it taller.Wow! a-qiu! Ops that was unlucky.Don't cry, please don't cry.Look! Oh!What are they drawing this time? Can you guess?Oh, look it be.Done! Look! It's you! Funny.Funny.They have lots of fun, but it's time to go home now.I don't want to go home. I want to go on play with Penelope.We will see her again.Ok. Bye Penelope.See you.See you. bye-bye.It looks if Peneple has a twin brother.Penelpe has a lot of fun playing with the twins today.

心情小雨 发表于 2012-2-8 13:53:41

本帖最后由 心情小雨 于 2012-2-8 19:53 编辑

另外我发帖时本来想用邀请功能 邀请朋友来看这个帖子的，结果找个遍都找不到哪里有邀请功能，以前好像的确看到过的呢，奇了怪了有人知道在哪里嘛？

找到了 呵呵 测试一下

dragon1978 发表于 2012-2-8 14:34:48

写得真好啊。
Hello, It is Penelope's auntie Mary Cesarine and her twin cousins Milo and Madeline.
Wash your hands first all right?
如何？

菲林 发表于 2012-2-8 15:14:50

本帖最后由 菲林 于 2012-2-8 21:02 编辑

改了几处小细节，供参考
22.Milo and Madeline
Someone's at the door.
Yes. Just a moment please.
Oh!
Godness me! They look exactly the same.
Mile and Madeline!
Hello! Hello!
Hello, Penelope!
Hello, It is Penelope's auntie Mary Cesarine and her twin cousins Milo and Madeline.
It’s nice to see you both.
En..Which one is Milo and which one is Madeline?
Yeah! Let's play. Let's play.
En..Let's play hide and seek.
Yeah! Let's play hide and seek.
Where are they?
They're playing hide and seek.
Penelope is trying to find Milo and Madeline.
Ah, got you, Milo.
No, I'm not Milo, I'm Madeline.
I'm Milo.
Oh. I made a mistake.
They're drawing pictures now.
I'v got some biscuits for you. Wash your hands first all right?
Ok.
Can you see what Milo and Madeline are drawing?
That's funny. It's Milo's face.
No, this is Madeline.
This is Milo.
Even their pictures look the same.
This is just like Madeline.
This is just like Milo.
Wait, biscuits. biscuits.
Very good. Very good!
I'll have some too.
Wasn't she supposed to do something before eating the biscuits? Do you remember what it was?
They are very good.
Yeah!
Oh, I forgot to wash my hands.
You mustn't forget Penelope.
Now they're playing with wooden blocks.
This is very tall. Very tall. Let's make it taller.
Wow! Make it taller.
Wow! a-qiu!
Ops that was unlucky.
Don't cry, please don't cry.
Look! Oh!
What are they drawing this time? Can you guess?
Oh, look it be.
Done! Look! It's you! Funny.
Funny.
They have lots of fun, but it's time to go home now.
I don't want to go home. I want to go on playing with Penelope.
We will see her again.
Ok. Bye Penelope.
See you.
See you. bye-bye.
It looks if Peneple has a twin brother.
Penelope has a lot of fun playing with the twins today.

那我接下去写26吧，免得写25撞车，呵呵

心情小雨 发表于 2012-2-8 20:54:55

菲林 发表于 2012-2-8 15:14 static/image/common/back.gif
改了几处小细节，供参考
22.Milo and Madeline
Someone's at the door.


菲林，改的不错，最后一个penelope 我拼错了 也帮我改一下

牛崽酷 发表于 2012-2-15 19:32:23

真不错我都要好些听不出

TEDDY33 发表于 2012-3-29 10:38:41

倒数第二句应该不要那 if 吧。没有if 句子也是通顺的。^o^

baozimm 发表于 2012-4-2 14:20:32

你们好多的帖子我之前都没看到 呢，只看到20之前的，哈哈，现在恶补中


baozimm于2012-4-2 14:29补充以下内容：
倒数第二句会是it looks like penelopy has...么？look后面听着有个词，但是听不出来是什么词。if不大像。

晓晨妈 发表于 2012-4-2 15:44:03

wja-tj 发表于 2012-5-8 11:40:36

直接拿走喽，谢谢各位mm

xinruolianhua 发表于 2012-5-16 10:59:46

很不错。拿走了。谢谢。

fbk 发表于 2012-7-27 08:03:13

有几个地方没听出来，学习了
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