请指点一下女儿准备参加英语口语比赛的self-introduce

qing4555 发表于 2010-12-13 10:49:50

女儿本周六准备参加一个英语口语比赛比赛，由于去年参加特别不顺，第一轮就刷下来了。自信心受到的打击，这次在我的再三鼓励下才参加，所以我比较重视。虽然不是什么大的比赛，但想为孩子树立点信心。下面是孩子自己写的self-introduce,有不对的地方，高手们请指点一下，先谢谢了。

Hello, everyone. My name is XIAOJIN, my English name is Jenny. I am 11 years old. I’m from Nanjing Road Primary School. I am in class 1, grade 6. I like swimming. I can swim very well. My favorite fruit is the grape. I love purple best. Grapes are purple. In my spare time, I often read books, listen to music and watch TV. My favorite book is Harry Potter and the chamber of secrets. And , it’s my honor to be here. Thank you.
此次比赛分三个部分，第一部分自己介绍，第二部分问答，第三部门才艺表演。
孩子唱歌什么的才不行，准备讲个故事。大家的好的故事、绕口令、笑话什么的也请给我们介绍一下，最好有音频。

fiona 发表于 2010-12-13 10:59:02

我们去年比赛，讲了个little red hen故事，孩子的表情和肢体动作要到位，发音清晰响亮，就好，呵呵

时懒时勤 发表于 2010-12-13 11:19:43

随便看了一下，感觉全是相同的简单句句式，有点单调。
比如介绍姓名，可以说，my chinese name is xxx.you can also call me jenny. 规避了相同的my name is的句式。
介绍喜欢游泳时，可以稍微加两句，比如说，i like swimming very much and i swim quite well.Believe it or not, I can swim even faster than my daddy.

封疆大吏041010 发表于 2010-12-13 12:16:11

啊，进来学习了

peiling 发表于 2010-12-13 12:46:01

楼主是self-introduction需要多少字数呢？我们的口语比赛一般self-introduction是一带而过，重点在主题的内容上。

qing4555 发表于 2010-12-13 21:44:09

回复时懒时勤的帖子

谢谢指点。

qing4555 发表于 2010-12-13 21:46:11

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初赛要求1分钟的自我介绍。

peiling 发表于 2010-12-13 22:04:23

本帖最后由 peiling 于 2010-12-13 22:07 编辑

1分钟，内容还不少。在姓名与学校介绍完后，可突出爱好的介绍。楼主的介绍有点碎。

随便写了几句，供楼主参考。

“I have various hobbies, such as sports, listening to music and reading books. As to sports, I enjoy swimming most because swimming can make me stronger and healthier and I’m really good at it. Besides, I'm a bookworm and usually read different books in my spare time. Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets is my favorite book because the plot is fascinating..."

当然，楼主也可增加music 方面的爱好介绍。

qing4555 发表于 2010-12-14 08:23:49

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十分感谢。看来要加强学习。

时懒时勤 发表于 2010-12-14 09:49:16

本帖最后由时懒时勤于 2010-12-14 09:51 编辑

peiling写得真好！是高手。
发现有一个很小很小的bug，"mostly because" 不是 "most because"。是笔误吧。
LZ如果要copy peiling的这段，要改一下。

jialinmummy 发表于 2010-12-14 10:58:55

学习了，我们也很有用

peiling 发表于 2010-12-14 11:13:14

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非BUG也。“I enjoy swimming most because..."我最喜欢游泳是因为。。。。。。”

若改为“I enjoy swimming mostly because..." 则意思变为： “我喜欢游泳多半是因为。。。。。。”

楼主可借鉴性地使用，并可结合前面时勤时懒提供的建议，足矣。

时懒时勤 发表于 2010-12-14 12:50:31

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哦，明白了，原来你的意思是想说 i enjoy swimming quite a lot because ...
most是修饰enjoy，不是because的。

diana_d 发表于 2010-12-14 13:29:10

真不错，顺便自我学习了哈

qing4555 发表于 2010-12-14 14:37:49

谢谢热心各位，这个网站真是我们爸妈的好帮手。

xiaojingling 发表于 2010-12-15 07:57:37

跟着学习，下次我们也能参考！

清茶发表于 2010-12-18 17:19:13

都是好强的爸爸妈妈，努力向你们学习。

fu_manxing 发表于 2012-6-21 10:11:10

fiona 发表于 2010-12-13 10:59 static/image/common/back.gif
我们去年比赛，讲了个little red hen故事，孩子的表情和肢体动作要到位，发音清晰响亮，就好，呵呵

有视频吗，能否给共享一下啊。谢谢啊{:soso_e102:}

charlenedavid 发表于 2012-6-21 10:12:49

六年级的孩子，这样的自我介绍肯定太简单了。

网上搜索一下，很多的。

龙之翔 发表于 2012-6-21 15:59:10

本帖最后由龙之翔于 2012-6-21 16:05 编辑

Hello. Ladies and gentlemen, standing before you is a girl named xiaojiing, you may call me Jenney if you like. I am 11 years old and am currently studying at Nanjing Road Primary School, the school that I am very proud of. As I am now a six-grader, I am busy with my studying, but i have time for my hobbies too.Like most of the girls, i enjoy reading, listening to music and and sometimes I watch some cartoon movies. I am a big fan of Harry potter. Two years ago, my dad taught me to swim. In the beginning i was afraid of water, but I am so lucky to have a patient and caring father. I swear now I can swim as gracefully as a fish, thanks to my father.

sss02 发表于 2012-6-21 16:03:48

真厉害啊！

龙之翔 发表于 2012-6-21 20:38:05

sss02 发表于 2012-6-21 16:03 static/image/common/back.gif
真厉害啊！

随便写的，献丑了

龙之翔 发表于 2012-6-28 10:46:46

回fu_manxing，录不了啊，还没孩子呢

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请指点一下女儿准备参加英语口语比赛的self-introduce