诗歌习作：Self-portrait 短小精悍肖像描写
本帖最后由 Elizabeth 于 2012-10-2 18:45 编辑8年级习作，在读完诗集以后，我们要写一篇关于自己的诗。自己性格怎么样呢？self-portrait. 一般用第一人称，但下面写第三人称的自己，非常有新意，押韵写得很好。
She
She is as faint as spring.
She fells in love in a blink.
As if she never uses her brain to think.
She’s always optimistic when doing anything.
Which enables her to sink,
In all the vague and pleasant feelings.
She is as impetuous as summer.
She usually does whatever she thinks proper,
Even if there’re objections from bystanders.
And when she regrets after,
She would claim that this won’t happen ever.
But it’s useless, you know, she recalls lessons never.
She is as vast as autumn.
She hesitates when making decisions that’s significant.
She worries about pressure and longs for heaven.
She wishes to find a door open,
To a place where she receive much achievement.
And then all Math problems shall be forgotten.
But sometimes, she is as miserable as winter.
She has lost someone that really matters.
And she finds the pain spreading wider and deeper.
There she gazes upon the sky and wonders.
Who else would take off her cover,
To reveal the true, authentic her.
这样的诗已经入门了，关键是英语啊 不知道怎样才能练出这文笔,光读肯定是不行的 积累再积累。有储存才能厚积薄发。这样的孩子阅读量是很大的，平时练笔也不少。 楼主在哪个城市啊，可否分享一些如何找专业教精读和写作的老师呢？我家孩子虽然还未到这一步，但得开始筹划起来了。谢谢！
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