为什么要去读大学？ 9年级

Elizabeth 发表于 2012-6-21 01:00:18

本帖最后由 Elizabeth 于 2012-6-23 19:36 编辑

背景：国内学校9年级学生，当场写作。

Why People Go to College
People attend college for a variety of reasons. Essentially, college provides an opportunity to study things you are interested in, it also enables you to find a better job with satisfying salary, and another main reason is that you will meet more educated people in college. Normally, people study a number of subjects before college, such as literature, mathematics, arts and so on. Throughout our learning procedures, we are able to find one or two subjects that we are actually interested in and willing to put effort into it. Therefore, if we enroll in college, we will have a chance to analyze more specific things and major in subjects we are good at. In addition, most people go to college for a better job. Nowadays, jobs that are well-paid usually require people who have college diploma. Because finishing college study means that you have complete your learning in schools. Job interviewers consider college diploma important for person who wants to get the job. Also, networking is a basic reason why people go to college. You will get to know more educated people in college than in junior high. You can learn from these people and ask them to give you a hand when needed during your work afterwards. Because people you meet in college are normally reliable, especially the ones that major in the same field as you. To conclude, there are many reasons why people enroll in college. Mostly because college provides opportunity to major in things different people interested in, college helps people to get a better job, and college is the place where you meet helpful and outstanding persons.

安妮妃儿 发表于 2012-6-21 01:37:30

真好，厉害啊这个九年级的孩子

宅居氏 发表于 2012-6-21 10:18:13

人才，：“21世纪最缺的是什么-------人才“。

diana_d 发表于 2012-6-21 12:56:23

这个题目有点难

luckflay 发表于 2012-6-22 08:11:55

厉害，怎么练出来的

animy 发表于 2012-6-22 17:11:43

谢谢，学习了！

QQMM 发表于 2012-6-23 19:33:25

这个....太厉害了！

谁练出来的？

9年纪是指初三吗？有点困惑....

安子7698 发表于 2012-6-23 20:36:51

拜读，希望以后常读到孩子们的英文作品。

Martina 发表于 2012-6-23 20:39:11

这个写得的确不错，就是译成中文也失为一篇好短文

flyingboy 发表于 2012-6-28 19:52:59

题目很吸引人，可点击进来看不懂。哈哈，看来我需要恶补英语了。

chenlei 发表于 2012-7-2 09:28:53

进来学习的!!!

zhangwawa 发表于 2012-10-16 08:50:40

different opinons.

johnwawa 发表于 2012-10-16 08:52:12

国内外差异很大。

粉嫩嘟嘟 发表于 2012-10-16 11:46:01

太强了，膜拜中，怎么练就的

prcll 发表于 2012-10-16 12:31:52

写的真好。{:soso_e179:}

shaleochen 发表于 2012-10-24 10:42:49

这写作水平过四级应该没问题吧

ruanj32 发表于 2013-6-29 12:42:35

好厉害啊，仰慕

pl09092000 发表于 2013-8-5 22:24:31

厉害啊,厉害啊

qq0601 发表于 2013-8-11 11:06:38

写的好，可惜看不懂，希望我家孩子以后也能写出我看不懂的东西来~

航行每一站 发表于 2013-10-10 13:20:06

看不懂的家长，自己需要努力一下了，不为孩子为自己也是必要的。

小玲珑 发表于 2013-10-10 14:43:36

厉害，怎么练出来的

水泡豆豆 发表于 2014-3-7 15:28:08

结构清晰，语言流畅。应该是外国语学校的学生吧。或者是顶尖初中的学生。

mn5599 发表于 2014-4-18 13:53:23

这写作水平，在校大学生都写不出

猫头鹰 发表于 2014-4-29 23:01:48

绝对中国人逻辑，真刺眼。流畅的句子，中式的表达将“灾民心理”特质表现的淋漓尽致…

ramaomao 发表于 2014-11-5 16:24:51

可以和大学英语专业出来的学生媲美了.

结构紧凑，观点清晰，一目了然，这种文章如果在考试中应该可以拿到高分吧。

阿春1008 发表于 2014-11-5 17:00:17

这孩子的英语水平很好，用词句型语法都很到位。态度很真诚，把平时父母和老师的教诲都诚实的写在作文里了，值得赞扬的是没有拔高上大学的崇高意义。但总觉得缺什么！小小的提示，不知道complete少了一个d会不会扣分？

会飞的云666 发表于 2016-10-24 08:58:26

太好了，学习学习

Meg2010 发表于 2017-9-20 12:31:02

谢谢分享，让大家了解了信息很好的资源，帮顶。

Giant 发表于 2019-10-24 09:01:29

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