明天参加市里低年级口语比赛，请大家帮忙再帮我改下，是否还有语法问题？
Hello, everyoneToday my topic is “I Love Pandas”.
My father and I flew to Beijing last summer vacation. When we got to the Beijing zoo, we saw some pandas. I like them very much. They look like bears, but they are not scary.
Pandas live in China. They have very small tails and fat bodies. They are black and white. They’re very clumsy, but they can climb trees. They are not good at fast running, but they can even be faster than a human 100-meter dash champion in a sprint. They like eating bamboos very much. Look! The baby panda snuggling up to the mother panda.They are sleeping.They look very lovely. Pandas are my favorite animals.
Thank you!
哪位帮我看看有无语法问题
在北京比赛啊 江苏无锡的，和和调个 Pandas live in China.
你这句的意思是不是想说：熊猫原产中国？？如果是这个意思就要换这个表达：Pandas are native to China. Hello, everyone
The topic of my speach is “I Love Pandas”.
My father and I flew to Beijing last summer vacation. When we got to the Beijing zoo, those cute chubby pandas caught our attention .I have to admit that i had a major crush on them at first sight. They look like bears, but they are not so adorable, not scary at all.
Pandas live in China. Although they look very clumsy,they can climb trees. They are not good runners in the animal kindom, but they can beathuman champions in 100-meter dash . They like eating bamboos very much. Look! The baby panda is snuggling up to the mother panda.Look at their small tails and chubby bodies.Isn't them adorable.?Pandas are my favorite animals.
Thank you!
summer vacation 听上去比较证实，如果是口语的话用summer holiday 是不是好一点啊 个人体会, 口语比赛语音语调以及表情肢体语言比较重要, 具体在说什么不重要.
评委老师也知道这些都是有人润色过的. 个人感觉还是本色一点比较好. 一般随后还有即兴问答的, 常常会结合你的演讲内容来问的, 还是自己写的比较能掌控吧.只要没有严重的语法用词错误就可以了. 语音语调不是一天能改进的 flora602 发表于 2012-6-28 14:48 static/image/common/back.gif
summer vacation 听上去比较证实，如果是口语的话用summer holiday 是不是好一点啊
SUMMAR VACATION不正式啊 龙之翔 发表于 2012-6-28 14:35 static/image/common/back.gif
Hello, everyone
The topic of my speach is “I Love Pandas”.
My father and I flew to Beijing last...
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不客气 北极的企鹅 发表于 2012-6-28 13:53
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Hello Everyone!
你这篇写得不错，念起来比较顺。 熊猫喜爱吃的是bamboo还是bamboo leaves啊
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