Elizabeth 发表于 2012-7-31 21:50:44

恐怖故事（段落） 6年级

本帖最后由 Elizabeth 于 2012-8-1 06:57 编辑

背景：6年级

                           LAMETTE

They kept on smiling and I didn't know why. I stared into their eyes and found myself in such a fear. They didn't move. They didn't take a single step. I was horrified and I found that I was scaring myself to death. The two of them were both creepy. Their lips kept on pressing together and it curled into a wide grin. I took a step back and my back was sweating. It seemed like they were twiching a smile so evil that can make people feel a sudden chill. They fix their eyes on me and started to move, to snare at me, to catch me. And that were the last time I saw the world. They're a pair of LAMETTEs. I never put too much thoughts on how I would die but now I knew it.

kedalong 发表于 2012-7-31 22:09:57

linlinmama 发表于 2012-8-2 12:49:12

坛子里到处是牛娃啊

walkonrain 发表于 2012-8-2 13:13:12

太厉害了哦。常规教育出来的本科生也没这个水平。

bg5hmm 发表于 2012-8-2 21:50:54

juanli5189 发表于 2013-8-7 15:44:53

看不太懂，好牛哇

lucky_lynn 发表于 2015-1-28 19:22:18

写的真棒啊。

tutu0127 发表于 2015-6-23 12:22:35

孩子想象力很丰富！
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