My amazing day
One day in the evening,I am a girl flying to the moon.It is a secret way. I can see many stars in the black sky and CHANGE sister. I go to her home.
"hello,sister!" I say by myself."hi,nice to meet you !"CHANGE says. And the sister give me a fruit cup."This is the fruit of our space."she says,"It is very delicious,you can try it.""Mmm,great!"I say.And then,CHANGE sister and I sit on the spaceship.We are going to see the dark and black space."Oh, it is colourful!"I can see the big sun,the light moon,the twinkle stars and the fireworks!Iam so excited.
when I grow up,I want to be an austronaut and explore the space.I will be the firt girl on Mars!
--------这是我孩子开始自学G2 writing 后写下的作文,我自己的英语写作很糟糕,简直无法给孩子在写作上提供帮助.只有希望多写而已.也请高手指教下如何提高孩子的写作.
One day in the evening,I am a girl flying to the moon.It is a secret way. I can see many stars in the black sky and CHANGE sister. I go to her home.
"hello,sister!" I say by myself."hi,nice to meet you !"CHANGE says. And the sister give me a fruit cup."This is the fruit of our space."she says,"It is very delicious,you can try it.""Mmm,great!"I say.And then,CHANGE sister and I sit on the spaceship.We are going to see the dark and black space."Oh, it is colourful!"I can see the big sun,the light moon,the twinkle stars and the fireworks!Iam so excited.
when I grow up,I want to be an austronaut and explore the space.I will be the firt girl on Mars!
--------这是我孩子开始自学G2 writing 后写下的作文,我自己的英语写作很糟糕,简直无法给孩子在写作上提供帮助.只有希望多写而已.也请高手指教下如何提高孩子的写作.
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