john老师要求写，小当和好朋友的相同点和不同点。
My Best Friend
By Alice
Flora is my puppy. She is my best friend. We both like reading and hearing stories. We are enjoyed when my mom tell the stories. But you know even we are best friends, we also have differences. Flora has a tail. She can wag it when she met new friends. I have no tail, it make me unhappy. But Flora will share her joy with me. We are best friends.
john老师的点评和修改！
My Best Friend
By Alice
Flora is my puppy, and she is my best friend. We both like reading and hearing stories. We enjoy my mom telling us stories. But even though we are best friends, we also have differences. Flora has a tail and wags it when she meets new friends. I have no tail, it makes me unhappy. But Flora will share her joy with me. We are best friends.
Alice, very well written paragraph. I combined some of your sentences to eliminate some of the periods. Please view the corrections and ask if you have any questions.
