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“忿怒”出作家?儿子的一篇小短文

热度 7 已有 269 次阅读 2014-1-28 10:35 个人分类:languageart 系统分类:成长记录

前天,在某种情形下,儿子有点气不忿地坐到书桌前,一气呵成了如下短文:

   There was once a little boy named Nick. One day, he was trying to solve a difficult math problem. His dad was listening to rock-and-roll music. He asked his dad to turn down the music. "You'd have to learn to be undisturbed by it," dad said. So Nick tried to be undisturbed, although he still can't concentrate.
    A few days later, dad was doing a very, very hard crossword puzzle. Nick was playing with the dog, shouting. "Be quiet!" dad barked at him. "I'm trying to concentrate." Nick thought it wasn't fair. When dad was disturbing him, he had to get used to it. When dad is disturbed by him, he had to stop. How can that be fair? Why don't dad get used to it?

   What do you think? Is Nick right?

今天爸爸看到了,脸露坏笑问:Who is that NICK?



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  • hidden imlucky

    2014-1-28 11:35

    妈妈的看法:总体比较满意,一些小的时态错误未修改。
    欢迎大家指点
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  • hidden stellashi2010

    2014-1-28 11:51

    写得不错啊,有的大学生也不一定写得出来啊。楼主的儿子是怎么练习写作的?
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  • hidden imlucky

    2014-1-28 20:48

    过奖了。我们只是平时喜欢看原版章节书,也许初步受了点这类风格的影响。
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  • hidden anniewen2002

    2014-2-18 11:13

    水平比我高多了, 我还过了大学英语六级了.
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  • hidden dilifang

    2014-2-21 20:15

    写得真好。
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  • hidden 婷婷妈2005

    2014-3-24 18:41

    能熟练使用从句写东西了,起码有英语母语国家3年级水平了,真棒!如果能使用一点高级别的写作词汇,就更好了。女儿的老师一直在孩子们写作时提醒注意词汇的使用,老外特别注重这块。
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  • hidden 洋洋妈

    2014-3-31 04:08

    写得好,有思想,加油!
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  • hidden emilyQQ

    2014-10-8 09:17

    写得活灵活现,有逻辑,赞!再说说我觉得很神奇的地方,孩子已经看出了其中的不公正,但没有顶着干,而是选择这样理性地分析,请教孩子的爸爸妈妈是如何培养出他这种处理问题的态度的啊?
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  • hidden chnsarah

    2014-12-16 13:15

    Nick写的真好!
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