How far you can see（原稿）
Stain is a very old man who lives in a small flat in New York. Every evening he went for a walk around the streets.
One night, it was 12：30 and Stain is about to go home, when a large car rushed towards a parked car. In the moonlight, he found the large car is a blue one and the parked car is a red one. Two car owners began arguing: “You came around the corner too fast! Give back my car!” “You parked the car in the wrong place!”…The owner of the red car asked Stain whether he saw the accident. When Stain said yes, the owner asked Stain for his phone number and his name. Tomorrow they will go to court. The next day, Stain received a phone call from the court, and asked to come to the court. The lawyer for the driver of the blue car asked:“How old are you?”
“I’m eighty-seven.”
“Do you wear glasses?”
“Yes.”
“Are you wearing it last night?”
“No!”
The lawyer laughed and said:“You are eighty-sever years old and not wearing glasses, it was very dark. How far you can see?”
Stain was very angry for the man was rude to him and said:“I can see the moon and the spoon in the sky. How far is that?”
How far you can see（批改稿）
Stain is a very old man who lives in a small flat in New York. Every evening he went for a walk around the streets.
One night, it was 12:30, and Stain is about to go home when a large car rushed towards a parked car. In the moonlight, he found the large car was a blue one and the parked car was a red one. Two car owners began arguing: “You came around the corner too fast! Give back my car!” “You parked the car in the wrong place!”…The owner of the red car asked Stain whether or not he saw the accident. When Stain said yes, the owner asked Stain for his phone number and his name. Tomorrow they will go to court. The next day, Stain received a phone call from the court and was asked to come to the court. The lawyer for the driver of the blue car asked:“How old are you?”
“I’m eighty-seven.”
“Do you wear glasses?”
“Yes.”
“Were you wearing them last night?”
“No!”
The lawyer laughed and said:“You are eighty-sever years old and were not wearing glasses. It was very dark. How far you can see?”
Stain was very angry for the man was rude to him and said:“I can see the moon and the spoon in the sky. How far is that?”
I did not find many problems. Check the other essay for hints. I have a couple below. Keep going! You are doing a great job
Plural and singular – how many people/objects are we talking about?
Do you have my book? Do you have it?
You are talking about one book, so you can replace book with it.
Do you have my books? Do you have them?
You are talking about more than one book. You can replace books with them.
