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3月30-5月3日-5月15日

热度 1 已有 162 次阅读 2021-6-9 19:48 个人分类:英语考试 系统分类:成长记录 英语

3月30
5月3 第一次考试 差几分晋级之后花了300元参加复活赛
5月15 复活比赛
题目参看相册第三次演讲第一部分和第二部分
第三次演讲
因为娃很喜欢用maisy当主角写故事,所以我们就写maisy 这只老鼠的故事,但是maisy一般是被称作mouse, 而不是rat。所以我们故意强调了一下她是rat, 再没确定maisy之前,娃说自己虽然生肖horse但是他不想写这个,他想要写dragon,因为dragon是中国的象征,很有气势。后来我编了一个maisy 老鼠的故事,让娃熟悉的时候,他不干,他说他要自己编一个故事,但是他编的故事感觉不连贯,也不是太好,我不同意用他的,僵持了几天,我把我的故事读给他之后,他说还是要自己写故事,他说我写,这次他的故事在借鉴了我的故事情节之后还算比较完整,但是故事有点长。
当我们考试第二阶段的时候,老师出题有点故障了,虽然我们说了数字,但是没有出现图片,老师说了一个toycar,娃也不知道听没听清楚
反正这次考试的时候,讲的故事不好。另外第一阶段的故事太长了,快讲完的时候被老师打断了。然后就是没有晋级,但是有复活的机会,交300块钱再考一次,然后我们把改删掉的删掉,该简化的简化,争取在1分钟内讲完,复活还是同样的题目,所以我们已经很熟了,当然是晋级了。
我编的故事
Today, I'll tell a story about a mouse maisy.
Maisy and Charley had found a golden key buried in a hole which caused by a falling down tree.
Masiy took it and put it under her pillow. In the midnight, she felt something glowing under her pillow,
wow, it was a magic key. Maisy called her friend charley to come over her home, and she read the key's word
abracadabra, the key brought them to a dark cave. Charley turned on his torch, they heard a low groan.
A voice came from the hole under a boulder. Is somebody there? Maisy said, yes, we're maisy and charley. Then the voice 
continued, "I was a dragon from the heaven, i was trapped by a wizard for i had drunk his magic liquid accidently, unless i got
melted snow water from the Himalayas i had to stay here forever. " So Maisy and Charley decided to ask their friend holly horse who was a winged horse to help.
they rode on the back of holly, holly flew over thounds of moutains, and landed on the peak of the Himalayas. maisy digged some snow
and put it in a glass bottle, then they took it on the journey to the cave. After holding the bottle for a long time, the snow melted
before it dipped into the dragon's mouth,then the dragon recovered his magic power, it smashed the boulder and got out of the trap.Before
he returned the heaven, he gave one of his scale as a gift to thank Maisy. Then the magic key glowed again, it took maisy and charley back home.

娃编的故事加上精简过后的版本
good afternoon, everyone! I will tell you a story about a rat called Maisy and her friend Charley.
Maisy and Charley found a magic key, the key began to glow, they were taken to a magic place: the sky. 
Maisy said, “We are above the clouds”.
Charley said, “Look, there’s a dragon.”
Maisy said, “Yes, but it’s stuck.Quick, we need to help him.”
Maisy and Charley pulled and pulled, they exhausted, but they couldn’t pull the dragon out of the trap.
The dragon said, “Before you coming I saw a fire, I’m afraid it will damage the world so I swallow it, then I got trapped. I need to swallow harbin’s iced balls to get me free.”
Maisy and Charley wanted to rescure him. They called their friends to send them to Harbin. Maisy digged two iced balls in a lake and put them in charley’s box. Charley drained the air out of the box so the iced ball wouldn’t melt. They took the box to the dragon. The dragon swallowed the iced balls and got free.
Maisy said, “eveyone sometimes need friend’s help.”
Thank you for listening !

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