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宝宝睡前编的英文故事

热度 1 已有 484 次阅读 2012-8-8 11:51 系统分类:成长记录 宝宝 , 英文故事

完全按照她说的词语打的,可以看出其中的错误很多,只是简单句子,就这样写在这里吧,过段时间来看看

 

Once upon a time, there was a squirrel named Tophy. Then Tophy meets  Teacher, Teacher was a very good squirrel. They became friends.

One day they went to the yard. And Tophy said:“ I’m so hot. Let’s go home. We played here quite a long time.” said Tophy. “No, I want to play.” Said Teach. “No,” said Tophy, “ I’m so hot. Let’s go home. But I think the weather is raining today. Look, so many cloud, we can go home.” So they go home.

Then a big alligator come. The alligator is big and bad. He can swallow(ed) one big goat and fifty hundreds elephants. And they meet the big bad alligator. He named Matty, so Matty wants to eat the two squirrels Teacher and Tophy. So they went home quickly. The big bad alligator wants to eat it, so he puffs. The house is so big and so strong, so the alligator is dead. “oh,” said Teach “but the alligator is not dead.” Just then, the alligator is () through the window , fell to the ground, then the alligator is real real dead. And they live happily ever after. The end and they have a party.

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  • hidden gedatou2007

    2012-8-8 12:28

    very good
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