英文习作
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2013-1-31
Grace同学刚刚完成的book review，初次尝试着实幼稚。
虽说Grace同学近期在句子运用上有所进步，但在文章结构上总觉得有所欠缺。我能看懂复杂的英文文章，但写过的英文作文难度却不及目前的Grace同学。
真心求专业阅读写作老师指点
A book review
My friend said that a book called On the Banks of Plain which is in the Little Wooden House Series is extremly charming and wonderful. So I proved her opinion when I read this book,as it is the most fantastic story I have ever read.
The story took place in the late eighteen to the early nineteen centuries when there were still Indians in the States and two girls who were called Laura and Mary lived at that time. It told us about Laura and Mary's life on the green plain with their family near a town in Texas. I was not only reading but also as if I was in a really amazing experience with Laura and Mary. I mean,the story was so moving and thrilling that whenever Laura and Mary did something in the story, I just wanted to try it myself. For example,when they got such pleasing presents from the church in town on Chrismas Day that I could't stop complaining why I could't get one of the prensents which were given by Santa Claus!
I would highly recommend this book and its series because it's so amazing for me and I believe that reading the book is a ideal way to improve one's personality. If I were you, I would star up reading this story as soon as possible.
