这一篇是去年5月为那场比赛的复赛写的，先自己画了一幅画，然后就那幅画配了这篇文。
第一稿
This is my invention in California at 3000. It is moning. The sun is floating high up in the sky. In that time the wild energy is using to make electricity.
First let us see the part in right. We could see water fall from the mountian. It make the giant wheels spin. When its spin electricity is made from the force of falling water. Could you see the rectangle thing? Inside is the giant wheels.
Look up at the sky. A little naughty clouds baby was blowing wind to make the big fan spin. We usually use the wind energy to make power.
At last we should talk about the solar energy. On the roof there have a special power collector to collect the light from sun. That collector change light into power.
There have a lightning conductor. It was not using to involved lighting. We should use lightning that it got. The lightning got in the battery and using by people.
First let us see the part in right. We could see water fall from the mountian. It make the giant wheels spin. When its spin electricity is made from the force of falling water. Could you see the rectangle thing? Inside is the giant wheels.
Look up at the sky. A little naughty clouds baby was blowing wind to make the big fan spin. We usually use the wind energy to make power.
At last we should talk about the solar energy. On the roof there have a special power collector to collect the light from sun. That collector change light into power.
There have a lightning conductor. It was not using to involved lighting. We should use lightning that it got. The lightning got in the battery and using by people.
修改稿，结果peter读了一遍说有的地方读不顺，最后比赛时读不顺的部分还是按自己来了。
This is my invention in California in 3000. It is moning. The sun is floating high up in the sky. At that time the wild energy is using to make electricity.
First let us see the part on the right. We could see water fall from the mountian. It makes the giant wheels spin. When it’s spinning electricity is made from the force of falling water. Could you see the rectangle thing? Inside is the giant wheels.
Look up at the sky. A little naughty clouds baby is blowing wind to make the big fan spin. We usually use the wind energy to make power.
At last we should talk about the solar energy. On the roof there is a special power collector to collect the light from the sun. That collector would change light into power.
There is a lightning conductor. It is not using to get involved lighting. We should use lightning that has got. The lightning got in the battery and would be used by people.
First let us see the part on the right. We could see water fall from the mountian. It makes the giant wheels spin. When it’s spinning electricity is made from the force of falling water. Could you see the rectangle thing? Inside is the giant wheels.
Look up at the sky. A little naughty clouds baby is blowing wind to make the big fan spin. We usually use the wind energy to make power.
At last we should talk about the solar energy. On the roof there is a special power collector to collect the light from the sun. That collector would change light into power.
There is a lightning conductor. It is not using to get involved lighting. We should use lightning that has got. The lightning got in the battery and would be used by people.
