已有 399 次阅读 2013-10-27 16:44 个人分类:Tido的第一次 系统分类:英语学习 文章
TICO的第一篇文章 《number》 There was a old house,The cat live in old house. one day,the cat was hungry,the cat is open the fridge.there was a dish ,on dish there was five fish.the cat love eats fish,the cat eat one fish.there is only four fish on the dish.the cat want eat another fish,so the cat eats another fish.there is only be left over three fish on the dish.but the fish is yummy and tasty too,so the cat wants eat another fish ,the cat eat one fish for well,but there is be left over two fish on dish ,be left over of two fish,the cat swallowed two fish, the five fish is all in cat tummy 自己英语太差,不敢随便指导,得去请TICO的英语老师帮忙批改下,自己也偷师学艺去。呵呵! 下面是Tico的手写稿 |