昭昭一千零一夜（15）
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2013.10.4
Chapter 1
Once upon a time,there was a policeman. His name was Jack.
His ooffice was very good. He had a friend named Jill.
Jill is a helicopter driver.
Everyday Jack went to the airport and look for Jill.
Jill likes helicopters.His helicopter can fly very fast.
Chapter 2
The desert
They go to the desert.
"We must ride my car.Only car can drive into the desert."
"And desert is very sandy. It's fun."
"Look! There's a sandbox.Wow, there is a dragonfly. That dragonfly is cool" said Jill.
Jill want to catch it.
"Look this." said Jack. "It's strange,that is a desert rose."
Wow, a strong wind came, and blow and blow and blow.
"Look, there is a treasure map. We can go 10 steps and find the treasure."
"We are going to 10 steps. We can use that bucket and dig,dig,dig."
"Look, we find the treasure.Open it, there was a big box of cats."
"We have cat." said Jill. "Let's go."
Chapter 3
Look, the USA, and look that, that is a treasure map.
"What does the map say?"
"The map says '10 steps, there is a Parit(农夫名派瑞特)' "。
"Hello Parit, my friend. Can you see a myfort(儿子说是帝国大厦，后来昭妈查的字典，应该是 the Empire State Building)?"
"Yes, I can."
"Where is it?"
"Behind you.Over the building there was yard and had a graveyard."
"We use a spoon to dig dig dig. We find the treasure.Inside was a big box of dog."
The end.
昭昭这篇整个一个“散文”，前言不搭后语，那叫一个完全没重点，呵呵。下次想给昭昭来命题作文了。
Chapter 1
Once upon a time,there was a policeman. His name was Jack.
His ooffice was very good. He had a friend named Jill.
Jill is a helicopter driver.
Everyday Jack went to the airport and look for Jill.
Jill likes helicopters.His helicopter can fly very fast.
Chapter 2
The desert
They go to the desert.
"We must ride my car.Only car can drive into the desert."
"And desert is very sandy. It's fun."
"Look! There's a sandbox.Wow, there is a dragonfly. That dragonfly is cool" said Jill.
Jill want to catch it.
"Look this." said Jack. "It's strange,that is a desert rose."
Wow, a strong wind came, and blow and blow and blow.
"Look, there is a treasure map. We can go 10 steps and find the treasure."
"We are going to 10 steps. We can use that bucket and dig,dig,dig."
"Look, we find the treasure.Open it, there was a big box of cats."
"We have cat." said Jill. "Let's go."
Chapter 3
Look, the USA, and look that, that is a treasure map.
"What does the map say?"
"The map says '10 steps, there is a Parit(农夫名派瑞特)' "。
"Hello Parit, my friend. Can you see a myfort(儿子说是帝国大厦，后来昭妈查的字典，应该是 the Empire State Building)?"
"Yes, I can."
"Where is it?"
"Behind you.Over the building there was yard and had a graveyard."
"We use a spoon to dig dig dig. We find the treasure.Inside was a big box of dog."
The end.
昭昭这篇整个一个“散文”，前言不搭后语，那叫一个完全没重点，呵呵。下次想给昭昭来命题作文了。
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