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暑假记录4 习作C2

热度 13 已有 658 次阅读 2014-7-19 10:24 系统分类:成长记录 记录

20140718
1、阅读:傲慢与偏见
2、语文阅读策略 C1.1
3、古文阅读
4、人类的故事 2 Our Earliest ancestors
5、满分作文:天津卷
6、希利尔讲世界地理 P1-30
7、雅思词汇 4页
8、音频:The Parasol Protectorate系列,book 1 Soulless 
9、写作:the Dark Starlight C7

Chapter two

     “So, you’re telling me vampires exist?” Jeff was dead serious, smiley face all gone. And he said this, loud.

     “Shh, be quiet! Do you want everybody to hear you?” I glanced around nervously.

     “It’s not like anyone is going to believe you.” He said, a smirk on his face.

     I had to admit, I was a little disappointed that he didn’t believe me. Well, what did I expect? In these days, who believes in vampire? “Yeah well, you shouldn’t either. I’m just telling my story, the card didn’t say you have to believe.”

     His expression softened a little bit. “This story is really hard to believe, you know?”

     “I know. And it is something that has been bothering me. I didn’t expect you believe, but, you are the first person I have ever told this story to.” I said.

     “Really? You never even tell your dearest butler?” He arched an eyebrow.

     “Nah. I didn’t want him to worry.” Then, seeing his smile, I added. “I told you because I had been keeping too much thoughts in my brain, it’s about to burst.” I made a face.

     “So I’m your trash can.” He grinned and picked a card. “My turn.”

     I read over his shoulder:

     Truth: Say something about the person next to you.

     Dare: Talk with the accent of your choice for the next hour.

     “Is there an hour until we get off the plane?” I asked

     “Yeah.” He said. “We have an hour and ten minutes until we land.”

     I couldn’t help it, he looked so miserable, I cracked up again. “Which one do you choose?”

     “Truth.” He sighed.

     “Sighing is not good for children.” I grinned. “Now, spill.”

     He studied me, his ocean blue eyes bored into me.

     “You are very----active, open, boyish, cool, cute, a little jumpy, a little silly and if the story you told me is true, then you’re brave too. You are like my sister, she died last week…” He closed his eyes.

     “Thanks for the comments, and I’m sorry about your sister.” After I ran his words through my head, something didn’t feel right. “Wait, you said your sister died last week?”

     Then I realized that was something harsh for me to say. “You don’t have to tell me, you don’t----”

     He cut me off, “It’s ok. Yeah, she died last week. What do you want to know?”

     “Um, what was her name?” I knew the answer before he told me.

     “Katy, her name is, was Katy, but everybody called her Kat.” He said, I saw the pain in his eyes. “The day after Halloween, we found her body in front of the graveyard.”

     I couldn’t help it. I burst into tears, I didn’t attend to Kat’s funeral, there’s too much pain. Every time I thought of Kat, there was a voice inside of me saying, you killed her, she died because of you.

     Jeff seemed surprise, “You don’t have to shed tears over my little sister.” He forced a smile, but I can see a lot of pain in his eyes.

     “No. Your sister died because of me, it’s my fault.” I sobbed.

     He stared incredulously at me, “What on earth are you talking about?”

     “Kat, she’s my best friend. We played ‘trick or treat’ on Halloween. We got in to a fight, she ran off. So, her death is my fault. I’m so so so sorry. ” I said, voice trembling.

     To my surprise, Jeff only patted me and said, “The past is the past. Yes, Kat’s death gave us a lot of pain, but we have to move on, right?” He smiled at me. Then, he added, “You see? Life is full of miracle, one had just happened.”

     “huh? I didn’t see any miracle.” I looked around. When I turned back, I caught him looking at my cross necklace. Something very different from his usual self was showing in his eyes. Dangerous? Cold? Pure evil? Then he glanced at me, saw me looking at him, and quickly glanced away.

     What was that all about?

     “No? The miracle happened before your eyes! I just had an amazing speech, and how often does that happens? Never.” He said with a sarcastic tone in his voice.

     That did it, I finally gave him a little smile.

     “After she died, I think I’ve changed, I’ve learned how to hide my emotions, all this time, I thought her death was my fault. Now, I meet someone that thinks the same.” He said as he handed me one of the soda cans.

     We opened our cans. I raised mine, “To us, to Kat!”

     “To us, to Kat!” His smiley face finally returned.

     “No offense, but how did she die?” I knew that answer too, and this answer was the one I feared the most. “Was it her neck…?”

     “Yes. So maybe your story is true after all.” He said, a little wary.

     “Yeah, I guess.” I quickly change the subject. I cocked my head at the cards, “You still wanna play?

     He checked his watch, “Nah, We’re landing.”

     Just as he said that, the sweet voice ran through our plane again, “Ladies and gentlemen, we’ll soon be landing at John F Kennedy Airport……”

     “So, is this goodbye?” I asked, hoping we would meet again.

     “Maybe, maybe not. Whether we meet again depends on fate.” He said, but his eyes were giving me that chilling look again.

     One by one, we walked off the plane. The morning light was shinning brightly, I breathed the fresh air and sighed happily, turning to Jeff. He was gazing at the blue sky, smiling to himself. I gave Jeff a quick hug, a very friendly one. And then we parted.

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  • hidden Jean

    2014-7-19 20:53

    勤耕不辍!今天拿Maggie的精神激励了一下欣,人家今天下午才肯重新整理了Katie老师的作业批改
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  • hidden fiona

    2014-7-19 23:49

    Jean: 勤耕不辍!今天拿Maggie的精神激励了一下欣,人家今天下午才肯重新整理了Katie老师的作业批改
    Maggie说这个故事是她最爱的,写着玩的,Katie的作业虽然也编的比较欢实,毕竟是作业,还是有点压力。欣欣的暮光续写继续啊,俺还守着坑等着呐
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  • hidden Jean

    2014-7-20 11:36

    fiona: Maggie说这个故事是她最爱的,写着玩的,Katie的作业虽然也编的比较欢实,毕竟是作业,还是有点压力。欣欣的暮光续写继续啊,俺还守着坑等着呐
    人家好像没这个打算啊
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  • hidden 宝宝贝贝2000

    2014-7-21 15:06

    挺好的,加油,只是Prologue的剧情有一些特别,希望有更多合理性。

                                                                  J
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  • hidden fiona

    2014-7-21 23:02

    宝宝贝贝2000: 挺好的,加油,只是Prologue的剧情有一些特别,希望有更多合理性。

                                                                  J
    是啊,她想到哪儿就写到哪儿,剧情好多突兀的地方,铺垫和前情交代得都不足。自己回头看看也有这种感觉,呵呵。
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  • hidden 宝宝贝贝2000

    2014-7-22 16:50

    fiona: 是啊,她想到哪儿就写到哪儿,剧情好多突兀的地方,铺垫和前情交代得都不足。自己回头看看也有这种感觉,呵呵。
    这是Jason的评价,他还是很喜欢这情节的, 一连看了三遍。继续,继续。
       回复
  • hidden emilyQQ

    2014-7-27 05:53

    第一次来,这样的年纪就能写英语小说了,惊讶。你家孩子读的是什么学校啊?英语超厉害啊。
       回复
  • hidden emilyQQ

    2014-7-27 05:59

    还有个问题:雅思和托福词汇有啥区别,你家选雅思有啥考虑吗?
       回复
  • hidden fiona

    2014-7-27 08:31

    emilyQQ: 第一次来,这样的年纪就能写英语小说了,惊讶。你家孩子读的是什么学校啊?英语超厉害啊。
    孩子是H版亲子英语理念的受益者,学校上的是家门口的公立中学哈。只是手边有一本雅思单词书,就让她自己看看的。
       回复
  • hidden emilyQQ

    2014-7-28 05:51

    谢谢回复 ,什么是H版亲子英语理念,刚才看了看爸妈网的亲子英语,内容基本都是针对幼儿的啊,中学生可利用的资料比较少哈。请问一下,Writer‘s Choice, The Language of Literature, The Parasol Protectorate系列在哪里能下到?你前面回复中The Parasol Protectorate系列的密码已经更换了吧,能否再发下密码给我,先谢啦~
       回复
  • hidden fiona

    2014-7-28 10:42

    emilyQQ: 谢谢回复 ,什么是H版亲子英语理念,刚才看了看爸妈网的亲子英语,内容基本都是针对幼儿的啊,中学生可利用的资料比较少哈。请问一下,Writer‘s Choice,  ...
    孩子8岁时启蒙是遵循爸妈网High版主的听力先行亲子英语理念走的,教材在论坛的英语资源区都可以找到。The Parasol Protectorate我没有动过呀,再重来一次哈,属于young adult哦。链接: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1u8jeA 密码: o0uj
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  • hidden emilyQQ

    2014-7-29 08:47

       多谢详细回复
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  • hidden 秋天的果实

    2014-9-21 10:52

    是我们的今后努力的方向。。。。
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  • hidden winniege517

    2014-10-30 15:27

    fiona: 孩子8岁时启蒙是遵循爸妈网High版主的听力先行亲子英语理念走的,教材在论坛的英语资源区都可以找到。The Parasol Protectorate我没有动过呀,再重来一次哈,属于 ...
    8岁启蒙,才几年就这么牛了。太赞了。
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