Simone's travel

who is her best friend was visiting her grandparents, Matt had gone to visit his Dad. Simone was boring.

Her Mom said:" you can read a book or drawing. Simone likes drawing so she slump into the chair and began

to draw.

   First, She draw a rooster names Mr.Dean. She draw her grandma and Simone feed some chickens.

   Next, she draw a hometown. She draw some apple trees, she draw a ballet class, and town people 

watched.

  Then she draw a picture of New York, it is biggest city in the USA. It is loudly, noisy, busy.She and Lindy make

up gargoyle story where they saw one. It is very , very scary.

  Last, Simone draw a big, big lake with boats on it. 

 She show them to her mother:" What do you like the most" she ask her Mom

The Mom said:" the lake" And Simone said:" This week can we visit the big , big lake? " Mom replayed:" yes".

很久没有写，不练就退。

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