[幼儿启蒙听说] penelope 第27集. Merry Christmas penelope

能爸真行啊

有没有英语特好的父母给咱们看看是不是写对了啊

菲林辛苦了。我改一点点小地方呵。有什么不妥的地方大家继续呵。
It’s Christmas day today. Can you see outside?
Oh, it’s snowing.
Wow!
Mum, daddy, it's snowing.
Good morning, penelope.
Good morning
Good morning,
it’s snowing, it's snowing.
How nice to have a white Christmas!
Yes!
We have (还是are having) a Christmas party this evening, penelope.(这里我听着好象也是are having.)
A Christmas party?
We’ll have a chirstmas cake and ...
Cake?
And we’ll all get presents.
Presents?
We’ll have lots of guests
Lots of guests?
Come here
Look, grandpa, grandma, aunt Marin Christine, uncle Nickless, Madeline twins:milo and Madeline.
Yes, the twin’s coming to
Wow, everyone’s coming. We are having a Christmas Party.
After breakfast, let’s star preparing for the party.
Ok.
They are preparing for the Christmas party. What will you prepare for the party?
Penelope and dad are decorating the room
I love Christmas. This is pretty.
Is that for you to decorate yourself? What do you think?
There! it looks good.
Well, lots of twinkling stars. Maderine will  love it.
Let’s decorate our Christmas tree next.
What shall we put on the Christmas tree?
These would be perfect to Milo and Madeline.
For Milo and Madeline?
Perfect for the twins?
What could they be?
See!
Oh, twins. That all twins.
You are right.
They’re all like Milo and Madeline.
The twins will like these very much.
And Grandma and grandpa, what ornaments do they like?
I know.
What is penelope going to do?
Grandma gave me this toy and a hat from grandpa.
They would love it.
They are some special ornaments, penelope.
En, en, something smells good.
It smells yummy.
What is it?
It’s roasted beef, penelope.
Your uncle Nickless loves it.
Does he?
Wow, it’s pretty.
I got the recipe from aunt Marin Christine . she is very good at making Christmas cake.
Christmas cake!
This is for grandpa, and this is for grandma, Milo’s here, and uncle Neckless, Madeline, and aunt Marin Christine and madeline, mum and dad
Who is this for?
This is the last one. Do you know whose plate it is?      
Oh, it’s for me. I forgot.
Don’t forget yourself, penelope.
Ok, everything is all set
Oh, the room looks so festive.
Are they here yet?
I can’t wait.                                                              
Oh, Merry Christmas, penelope.
Merry Christmas!
Now the party has begun.

本帖最后由 心情小雨 于 2012-3-7 11:58 编辑

It’s Christmas day today. Can you see outside?
Oh, it’s snowing.
Wow!
Mum, daddy, it's snowing.
Good morning, penelope.
Good morning
Good morning,
it’s snowing, it's snowing.
How nice to have a white Christmas!
Yes!
We have (还是are having) a Christmas party this evening, penelope.(虽然听起来象are having，但感觉应该是we'll have，这个更恰当吧 与下面几句时态一致.)
A Christmas party?
We’ll have a chirstmas cake and ...
Cake?
And we’ll all get presents.
Presents?
We’ll have lots of guests
Lots of guests?
Come here
Look, grandpa, grandma, auntie Marin Christine, uncle Nickless, Madeline and twins:milo and Madeline.
Yes, the twin’s coming to
Wow, everyone’s coming. We are having a Christmas Party.
After breakfast, let’s start preparing for the party.
Ok.
They are preparing for the Christmas party. What would you prepare for the party?
Penelope and dad are decorating the room
I love Christmas. This is pretty.
Is that for you to decorate yourself? What do you think?
There! it looks good.(同意There)
Well, lots of twinkling stars. Maderine will  love it.(同意Maderine)
Let’s decorate our Christmas tree next.
What shall we put on the Christmas tree?
These would be perfect to Milo and Madeline.
For Milo and Madeline?
Perfect for the twins?
What could they be?
See!
Oh, twins. They‘re all twins.
You are right.
They’re all like Milo and Madeline.
The twins will like this very much.我听到是this,不是these
And Grandma and grandpa, what ornaments do they like?
I know.
What is penelope going to do?
Grandma gave me this toy and a hat from grandpa.
They would love it.
They are some special ornaments, penelope.
En, en, something smells good.
It smells yummy.
What is it?
It’s roasted beef, penelope.
Your uncle Nickless loves it.
Does he?
Wow, it’s pretty.
I got the recipe from auntie Marin Christine . she is very good at making this Christmas cake.
Christmas cake!
This is for grandpa, and this is for grandma, Milo’s here, and uncle Neckless, Madeline, and aunt Marin Christine and madeline, mum and dad
Who is this for?
This is the last one. Do you know whose plate it is?      
Oh, it’s for me. I forgot.
Don’t forget yourself, penelope.
Ok, everything is all set
Oh, the room looks so festive.
Are they here yet?
I can’t wait.                                                              
Oh, Merry Christmas, penelope.
Merry Christmas!
Now the party has begun.

我听不出啥来了，就里面列人物的时候Madeline改成maderine就行。否则两个madeline.

Yes, the twin’s coming to.
这句Yes, the twin’s coming, too.
不然，总觉得to后面接个啥好点。

这一集里，有一个细节吸引了我的注意力：在摆盘子的时候，Penelope的爸爸抱着Penelope，Penelope的妈妈拿着盘子，Penelope一个个把盘子摆出来，一边摆一边说这是谁的，最后多出一个盘子，Penelope一时想不起来这是给谁的，呵呵。爸爸妈妈并没有直接告诉Penelope，而是让她自己想想，Penelope一会儿就想出来了，这是给她自己的，呵呵。谢谢楼主的英文版本。

mm们威武，我下的都用些没耐心了，mm们逐字听、写，可想其难。为了儿子啊

感谢楼主的分享

真方便，谢谢