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英语作文有进步:Is Having a Pet Good?

热度 2 已有 156 次阅读 2018-5-21 12:32 系统分类:成长记录 cla

本次课后老师留的家庭作业(2018-5-14)
Homework: May 14, 2018

Imagine you are deciding whether or you should get a pet. Write a list of the pros (good things) and cons (bad things) about having a pet. You should have five pros and five cons on your list. Use complete sentences!

这次作业我个人觉得完成的非常好,老师也给了38分(满分40分),贴到这里记录一下。

Is Having a Pet Good?

Different people have different thoughts about pets,but I think having a pet is good and bad the same time,like:

Good things about pets:

  1. They can make us smile.

  2. They can make us more healthy.

  3. We can have things to do when we're bored.

  4. We can have more exercise.

  5. They can stay with us when our parents are gone.

Bad things about pets:

  1. They are good at making a mess.Ha!

  2. They could be very loud and noisy.

  3. They can make us sick.

  4. Sometimes they could scratch us or bite us.

  5. They can get all the furniture in pieces.

So,what do you think?

老师的批改

Is Having a Pet Good?

Different people have different thoughts about pets, but I think having a pet is good and bad at the same time, like:

Good things about pets:

1.                              They can make us smile.

2.                              They can make us healthier.

3.                              We can have things to do when we're bored.

4.                              We can have more exercise.

5.                              They can stay with us when our parents are gone.

Bad things about pets:

1.                              They are good at making a mess. Ha!

2.                              They could be very loud and noisy.

3.                              They can make us sick.

4.                              Sometimes they could scratch us or bite us.

5.                              They can get all the furniture in pieces.

So, what do you think?


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  • hidden xuanjiangsara

    2018-5-21 14:22

    老师只改语法么?我觉得有些问题啊
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  • hidden goldbabe

    2018-5-21 17:00

    xuanjiangsara: 老师只改语法么?我觉得有些问题啊
    不是,老师从10个方面来批改作业,

        SPELLING:4
        CAPITALIZATION:4
        FORMATTING:4
        GRAMMAR:3
        IDEAS & CONTENT:4
        AUTHENTICITY & VOICE:4
        WORD CHOICE:4
        SENTENCE FLUENCY:3
        ORGANIZATION & PARAGRAPH USE:4
        PUNCTUATION:4
        Total:38.0/40
    我觉得时态混用是个问题,不是为什么老师没改。你觉得有哪些问题?谢谢哈!
       回复
  • hidden xuanjiangsara

    2018-5-23 15:27

    非常感谢你贴出评分标准。但是我更困惑了,[IDEAS & CONTENT:4 ORGANIZATION & PARAGRAPH USE:4]如果是这两个打分的话(4分是满分了,这么算。对不),我当时觉有问题的地方就是这里。(时态错/比较级等对EFL娃来说正常的小错)

    我想回头问一下别人确认一下我的gut feeling。但能告诉我:
    1)这个作文之前/之后有讨论么?还是只是评分?
    2)如果有讨论,对上面两个项,老师是怎么说的

    我无意说老师的不足(因为我不知道是不是不足,我只是从我的经验看,我觉得奇怪),再说我并不知道你们教学实际情况。纯粹是因为主题是猫引起的好奇(我先看的是小猫作文来着)
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  • hidden goldbabe

    2018-5-26 17:28

    xuanjiangsara: 非常感谢你贴出评分标准。但是我更困惑了,[IDEAS & CONTENT:4 ORGANIZATION & PARAGRAPH USE:4]如果是这两个打分的话(4分是满分了,这么算。对不),我 ...
    老师上课会讨论相关的主题,关于这个作业老师只批改并评分就不讨论了。
    你觉得有啥问题哈?
       回复
  • hidden xuanjiangsara

    2018-5-26 18:00

    goldbabe: 老师上课会讨论相关的主题,关于这个作业老师只批改并评分就不讨论了。
    你觉得有啥问题哈?
    我可以私信给你写。因为可以有格式清楚。但有个事,不知你愿意否:
    1)请微信发红包,只奖你觉得说有用的点1元/点(我记数用)。
    2)是否有兴趣给你们学校做宠物科普,如果你家猫是收养的流浪猫崽。--我是指找个写作展示的机会就往上面拽。
    都拒绝也没关系。我依然会说,因为已经迈一步了,我就不会退的。
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  • hidden goldbabe

    2018-5-26 22:25

    xuanjiangsara: 我可以私信给你写。因为可以有格式清楚。但有个事,不知你愿意否:
    1)请微信发红包,只奖你觉得说有用的点1元/点(我记数用)。
    2)是否有兴趣给你们学校做宠物 ...
    可以啊,加个微信哈
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  • hidden xuanjiangsara

    2018-6-1 23:40

    goldbabe: 可以啊,加个微信哈
    已传文档。我仍声明,只是我自己的想法而已。有困惑,但不judge。
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  • hidden Giant

    2019-12-1 20:22

    真好
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