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暑假记录2 习作-Prologue

热度 20 已有 806 次阅读 2014-7-16 23:00 个人分类:习作- Dark Starlight 系统分类:成长记录

20140716
1、阅读:傲慢与偏见
2、数学补充习题
3、成语 4页
4、人类的故事 1
5、听透BBC 3篇
6、跳绳300个,仰卧起坐20个,摸高10次
7、音频:The Parasol Protectorate系列,book 1 Soulless
8、写作:the Dark Starlight C6 完成
9、电影:
Wuthering Heights 看了20分钟,强烈要求换掉,只因为是悲剧,不喜欢。
Marie Antoinette 各种华丽、奢侈,够无聊的。

      Maggie在今年寒假里开始写小说,自己起了个酷酷的名字:the Dark Starlight。断断续续地写了5章,停了一段时间,搁到一边,改写Katie老师布置的作业,编了个新故事:Fletcher。平时上学没时间,一直憋着劲,要等暑假好好写写。夏令营回来就把第一本故事拾起来,继续写第六章。为了鼓励下埋头创作的Maggie,把她写的故事也放在日志里,留个纪念吧。她对这个序一直很不满意,估计会被推倒重写。

Prologue

      It all started at Halloween.

      That night, my friend Kat and I went trick or treating on the main street. Time went by, and it was already 9:30. Kat wanted to go home, but I would like to go to a few more houses and get some chocolate bars. And, I know a short cut though the graveyard.

      "Come on, please, please, please!" I begged her. And not waiting for her answer. I grabbed her hand and dragged her toward the graveyard.

      Kat sighed and went after me. We wondered off in the graveyard. The fog was so thick. I couldn't even see within 20 feet.  Ten minutes later, Kat gasped and pointed at a tombstone, a funny look on her face.

      "What?" I asked her, "Saw your own grave?"

      "No, I saw that tombstone about five minutes ago. I think we've been going around in a circle!" She said wearily. 
       I was dumbfounded.

      "OMG! I'm sooo sorry Kat! I thought I knew the way! Which, apparently I don't. I didn't mean to go around in circles! I didn't mean to drag you to the graveyard, I didn't mean —"

      "It's Ok, just calm down. Look, there's another path, we can go and try that one." Kat cut me short.

      So we went on, about 20 minutes later, a house rose in front of us. Yes, it literally rose from the ground and it was just hanging there. More a castle than a house, but there was a tablet dangling above the gate – Vampy Hotel. Weird.

      Not thinking with my head, I began to go for the door. But Kat grabbed my sleeve.

      "What's wrong?" I asked her.

      "Don't you think it's weird? A house rising in the graveyard like that? I don't know about going in." She said hesitantly.

      "Then what do you think we're supposed to do, wandering around the graveyard, and starving to death? I'm sorry, I'm going in." Looking at her surprised face, I realized I was too mean for a girl like her. I It was me that dragged her to the graveyard in the first place. "Kat, I'm--" I tried to tell her I was sorry, but what had been said could not be taken back.

      She cut me short again, "Save your apologies, I'm going home!" Then she ran away.

      Looking at her back, I thought about the rumors about the graveyard. And a horrible thought came to me: What if I'm not only losing her as a friend, but I'm losing her as a person? What if she dies out here?

      How could I have thought that? I slapped my forehead and ran after her. “Kat, come back! It’s dangerous walking alone out here. Let’s go home together!”

      No answer.

      “Kat! Where are you?”

      Everything was like a blur to me after Kat ran away. I remembered that I somehow opened the door and got in the house,. I was wondering in some kind of guest room. There was a grand-father clock, a big sofa, and then there's nothing, I was looking at the clock when I heard a thump and the floor creaked, something snarled. I was fully awoke then, and I was scared. I soft footed up the hall, coming toward the sound, and found a slightly opened door. I peeked inside, it was dark, but I saw two shadowy figures, one hitting the other. I was startled, I gasped, and the hitting person stopped hitting, turned and glared at me. He had blood red eyes. He started toward the door. I was frozen, just standing there, watching him walking toward me. Then I was pulled back by a strong force, and fell into another room.

      I turned and hit whoever it was that had pulled me, hard on the face. It was a boy, about one or two years older than me, maybe 13 or 14. He had spicy and fluffy red hair, handsome features and red eyes. They bore in to me. I whimpered, and crawled under a desk in the room. Then I stared at him, except the place I slapped him.

      The boy looked amused, "You hit me!" Like he couldn't believe a girl would hit him. Then he asked "What are you doing at the hotel?  You're not our kind."

      "Your kind?" I asked, confused.

      He said nothing, then the strangest thing happened, the red fingerprints on his face slowly began to disappear.

      Then the truth dawned on me.

      "You're a… You’re a, a vamp…" It seemed I couldn't say the word.

      "Vampire. Cold-one."

      "Vampires. Vampires?" I looked at the boy like he was mad.

      "Yeah, I can drink your blood if I want to." He said half heartily as I whimpered. "But that, I don't."

      "Gee, thanks. What's going on in there?" I cocked my head at the direction of the room I just peeked in.

      "New born. Gone mad." He said carelessly. "So how did you get here, usually no one can go in and out easily through the hotel."

      "I don't know, I was crossing the graveyard with my friend, and the house, or as you said, the hotel rose in front of us. And I just opened the door and walked in." I told him the truth.

      There are still amusement in his blood red eyes, "And where is your little friend, may I ask?"

      "We got into a fight, and she ran off, saying she's going home. I wish she's ok."

      "Nah, I bet she is dead." He said.

      "And that would be my fault." We felt in silence.

      After a while, I broke the silence. And asked, "So, now I know your little secret, will you kill me?"

      "I told you, I don't kill human when it isn't necessary." He said exasperated.

      I was relieved. "All right. Since you're not going to kill me, then let's be friends." And I gave him a grin.

      He was speechless, I think. Then, with a shake of his hand, he said with amusement, "I'm James."

      "Mackenzie. Mackenzie Carter."

      That night he told me a lot about his life. How his life was before, how had he turned into a vampire. Everything.

      Just when he was telling me a story. The old grand-father clock in the guest room chimed. I counted, one, two… seven, eight… ten, eleven, twelve.

      "God, it's already twelve! I have to go, I'm so sorry." I said.

      "No, don't be." He gave me the very rare smile of his. "I don't like what I'm going to do, but do you trust me enough to let me do this?"

      I don't know why, but I nodded firmly and said "Yes."

      I remember the last thing I saw was his blood red eyes, his soft voice saying go to sleep, and then, I saw nothing.

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  • hidden ebamaer

    2014-7-17 00:18

    看开头挺吓人的哈,12岁的小孩子自己不害怕吗?
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  • hidden fiona

    2014-7-17 08:32

    ebamaer: 看开头挺吓人的哈,12岁的小孩子自己不害怕吗?
    这孩子整天浸在奇幻世界里,是个大条的傻大胆,吸血鬼、鬼、异能啥的是她最喜欢听的题材,估计不会害怕的。
       回复
  • hidden 听听雨声

    2014-7-18 00:02

    读了一半,有点吓人,白天再读
       回复
  • hidden nick2lemon

    2014-7-22 17:08

    好厉害啊。成语是什么?
       回复
  • hidden fiona

    2014-7-22 17:37

    nick2lemon: 好厉害啊。成语是什么?
    家里有一本彩绘的成语词典,让她捡着有些面熟的成语看看易错的字、出处和词义。曾经的半拉子工程,现在捡起来,能看多少看多少吧。
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  • hidden nick2lemon

    2014-7-24 09:40

    挺好的。贵在坚持。学习中。

    有好的自然拼读教材推荐吗
       回复
  • hidden fiona

    2014-7-24 17:54

    nick2lemon: 挺好的。贵在坚持。学习中。

    有好的自然拼读教材推荐吗
    我们用过super phonics,适合有一定基础的小学生哈
       回复
  • hidden nick2lemon

    2014-7-28 10:00

    好的,谢谢。
       回复
  • hidden nick2lemon

    2014-7-28 10:08

    好的,谢谢。
       回复
  • hidden 齐齐妈妈

    2014-8-4 09:56

    小女生们怎么都爱Vampires?
       回复
  • hidden fiona

    2014-8-4 12:50

    齐齐妈妈: 小女生们怎么都爱Vampires?
       握爪,齐齐也迷吸血鬼么?
       回复
  • hidden 齐齐妈妈

    2014-8-4 16:22

    fiona:    握爪,齐齐也迷吸血鬼么?
    是的呢 受不了她
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  • hidden hanhust

    2014-10-16 14:54

    内容真丰富啊
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  • hidden 小白狐009

    2014-10-30 09:32

    hehe,吸血鬼迷
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  • hidden 小白狐009

    2014-11-2 12:01

    小鬼哟~
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