[亲子自助] 洋洋的一篇虚构小作文（有点老鼠记者style）

本帖最后由洋洋妈于 2013-5-18 10:36 编辑

昨天接洋洋放学的时候，洋洋跑进教室拿出写作本，让我看他的一篇关于城堡的小故事得到的“副校长奖励”贴纸。这篇作文是老师给孩子们看了一张古老城堡的图片，让孩子们随意发挥想象力，编一个小故事。我看了这篇文章，感觉很是老鼠记者Style，看来孩子非常喜欢看的书，会对孩子的写作风格产生不小的影响。表扬了洋洋的创作态度，能发挥想象力，并通过一些细节和描述性词汇把这个场景呈现到读者面前。不过发现洋洋的英文书写实在有些拿不出手，好像应该专门练习一下了。

I was on my way to the other side of the world when I found a magnificent castle. It had walls made of gold, a wizard tower in the middle, and ten humongous mossy stone statues in front of the gate. I was sure it was deserted because it smelt like dust and skeletons.

I wanted to claim the castle, but I was afraid it was haunted or a human-eating monster lived in it. Suddenly I heard a loud creak. My bones were shivering, my hands were shaking and my thoughts were saying “what was that!” Then out came a black dragon with purple wings and three heads - a snake head in the middle and two dragon-like heads with golden horns on the sides. I was terrified. Oh, I wished I had never come.

I started to run but I clumsily stumbled overa trip wire and fell into an underground quicksand trap. I wanted my Mummy and I was scared out of my wits. But I suddenly realised that there was a rope leading to the place where the trap was. So I climbed the rope without thinking. When I climbed out, I looked around. Then as quick as lightning, I ran to my car and drove away as fast as my car would take me, and never dared to ever go back to that castle.

顺便再向大家推荐一下老鼠记者（Geronimo Stilton）这套书，非常幽默风趣，主人公Geronimo是位谦谦君鼠（gentlemouse）, 人品很不错，而且见多识广，他在世界各地的见闻能让孩子学到挺多知识。男孩子可以看Geronimo Stilton系列，女孩子可以看Geronimo的姐姐Thea写的Thea Stilton系列。这套书很多本都有配套音频，配套使用，效果更佳。适合7，8岁以上，有章节书阅读能力的孩子。

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RubyAtCuisine

2013-5-17 19:30:34

的确，一个小作家正在成长中。看他的文章，非常有趣，也学到了很多东西。谢谢你贴出来和大家分享。

dawei3y3

2013-5-17 19:46:05

好棒啊，真看不出9岁小孩之笔

洋洋妈

楼主 2013-5-17 19:49:38

RubyAtCuisine 发表于 2013-5-17 19:30
的确，一个小作家正在成长中。看他的文章，非常有趣，也学到了很多东西。谢谢你贴出来和大家分享。

谢谢您的鼓励，其实孩子初学写作的时候，鼓励他写得好的方面比指出他的不足更重要，让孩子最起码先不畏惧写作，愿意用文字表达出自己的感情和想法，和大家分享。就像毕加索的名言- Every child is born an artist, the problem is to remain one once they grow up.