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恩恩妈

2013-07-23

[作文展示] 这两天的作文

前几天发的作文得到了大家的鼓励,今天再发昨天和今天的作文,希望能够坚持一天一篇作文。
Dinosaurs
Tonight, I was very tired. So I fell to sleep quickly. I had a dream. I dreamed I went back to the dinosaur time.
There were many dinosaurs shouting. Suddenly, a tyrannosaur appeared behind a tree far away. I hided in some trees and grasses quickly. The tyrannosaur didn’t see me. Just then a pterosaur landed beside me. I am not scared. Because I know pterosaurs didn’t eat people. I climbed the pterosaur’s back. Then the pterosaur flied into the sky. I saw some triceratops from the sky. They had three pointing horns. I saw a tyrannosaur chasing some little dinosaurs with his open mouth…….My pterosaur was hungry. He wanted to fly to catch some fish. So he flied to a river. He saw a fish. He caught the fish very quickly. I almost fell out . I
grabbed pterosaur’s back as hard as I could. The pterosaur flew into the sky again. Phew, that was close.
   The sun was going down. I had to go. I had a good time.
   The sun was shining through my window. It was morning. I woke up.

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  • huachun

    2013-7-23 12:44:50 使用道具

    我们中文还写不好呢。
  • Bigmother

    2013-7-30 10:32:38 使用道具

    写得不错,不过有几处小小的错误需要改一下。是楼主自己写的吗?
  • 恩恩妈

    楼主 2013-8-1 15:23:54 使用道具

    Bigmother 发表于 2013-7-30 10:32
    写得不错,不过有几处小小的错误需要改一下。是楼主自己写的吗?

    是有一些错误,我忘了修改,是我家宝贝儿子写的。
  • Bigmother

    2013-8-2 09:04:01 使用道具

    恩恩妈 发表于 2013-8-1 15:23
    是有一些错误,我忘了修改,是我家宝贝儿子写的。

    哇,那你小孩的英语很厉害啊,让我们家宝贝望尘莫及了,呵呵。楼主本身是英语老师吗?
  • 恩恩妈

    楼主 2013-8-2 10:30:48 使用道具

    Bigmother 发表于 2013-8-2 09:04
    哇,那你小孩的英语很厉害啊,让我们家宝贝望尘莫及了,呵呵。楼主本身是英语老师吗?

    不是英语老师啦,以前做了十年的翻译,现在改行了。
  • pl09092000

    2013-8-5 19:56:08 使用道具

    写得不错,写得不错
  • peter爸

    2019-8-21 07:11:35 使用道具

    真的很好,值得学习。