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火速学习！

顶一个！！

本帖最后由 洋洋妈 于 2013-9-19 14:22 编辑

楼上两位都家有两宝，糖豆、糖瓜，乒乒、乓乓听起来就又甜蜜、又热闹，真好。


Synonyms:   amazing, crushing, exciting
Antonyms:   mild, resistible, calm

Firstly make a chart of first names in my class to find out the numbers of each name used, arrange the names in alphabetic order.

Then find a person in each class to do the same thing.

In the end add up the same names from each class together and figure out which one is the most popular name.

----Yangyang

本帖最后由 晶莹剔透 于 2013-9-19 14:32 编辑

Q1:
*Synonyms: overcome、exceed、conquer、overtake
*Antonyms: rebound、revolt、contend、resist.
Q2:
Do you know how to plant a tree ? let me teach you.Frist ,dig a big hole for the tree.Then you put the tree into the hole and put a stick near it ,tie it with a rope ,so it wouldn\'t fall.and put the earth back into the hole.In the end ,water the tree.Now ,do you know how to plant a tree ?                                                      __________mary

Q2:
Do you know how to plant a tree ?(L) let me teach you.Frist ,dig a big hole for the tree.Then you put the tree into the hole and put a stick near it ,tie it with a rope ,so it wouldn\\\'t fall.and put the earth back into the hole.In the end ,water the tree.Now ,do you know how to plant a tree ?


To Mary,


Very good job! I do think you\'v improved a lot! And there are some tiny problems as below:


1. Always, remember the beginning of each sentence should be in capital letter.
2. The small plant we called seeding. So if you can change the \"tree\" into seeding, that would be more appropriate.
3. And \"the Earth\" mean the planet we live on! And soil is what plants need to grow.


Can you revise your article according to the three points above?

Do you know how to plant a tree ? Let me teach you.Frist ,dig a big hole for the seeding.Then you put the tree into the hole and put a stick near it ,Tie it with a rope ,So it wouldn\\\'t fall.and put the soil back into the hole.In the end ,Water the tree.Now ,Do you know how to plant a tree ?                                                      __________mary

本帖最后由 晶莹剔透 于 2013-9-22 21:02 编辑

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