说说我的看法高级模式
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心月妈妈 发表于 2014-5-22 08:50
起点那么高，却因为父母的自负被局限，可惜了好苗子。楼主要是真为孩子好，就找好老师教她吧。 不过楼主一向 ...
前两天中午鹭鹭在我单位里饭后出食堂时在地上捡了只蚂蚁玩，我要求她写篇诗关于蚂蚁，这是她用时两分钟写的
ANTS
There was an ant，
Who was called Marty.
She was my pet，
She was very smart，
And was very tricky too.
Marty was the smartest Ant I could ever had.
Do you like to have?
Well,ants are very tricky to find,
But don't worry,
You might catch one.
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lintao915 发表于 2014-5-22 07:47
时态、单复数、语义不通、词汇贫乏的问题就不说了。这都可以慢慢来。
最奇怪的是这句：Poor people don't ...
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前两天中午鹭鹭在我单位饭后出食堂时在地上捡了只蚂蚁玩，我要求她写篇诗关于蚂蚁，这是她用时两分钟写的。
ANTS
There was an ant，
Who was called Marty.
She was my pet，
She was very smart，
And was very tricky too.
Marty was the smartest Ant I could ever had.
Do you like to have?
Well,ants are very tricky to find,
But don't worry,
You might catch one.
From Lulu
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qiankun3 发表于 2014-5-22 13:20
刚才饭后鹭鹭写的这首诗，然后去电脑上打关于埃及金字塔的作文
PAINTING AND DRAWING
写完诗，鹭鹭到电脑上才打的小故事
EGYPT
Long, long ago, there was a Queen in Egypt, the Queen was called Marty, Marty lived inside a pyramid, the pyramid had a secret door, only the Queen could open the secret door.
One day, Marty was just going on a picnic, when suddenly, a very, very big black shadow slunk out of the forest, Marty suddenly forgot that it’s Halloween, so she opened the very big pyramids secret door, and went to pick out a costume. After half an hour,
the Queen picked out a fairy costume for Halloween, then she kept on going to the forest to have a picnic, after walking for a while, they felt a little hungry, so they saw a apple tree upon her head, so she called over some Indians to help and get some apples down, now she was full, and head home, she then saw a bread store on the way home, and bought a load of bread which she ate it, and happily went home.
The End
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