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谢谢坛子里的鹭宝宝和勤勤恳恳的鹭爸爸，发上充满生活情趣的小诗。
以为写诗是很难的，but writing a poem is easier than you might think，摘录学生的几篇诗作（学生程度不算好，略高于职高水平，三流高中
，有几位英语高考150分可能只能30分吧，能写出这样的诗，足以说明写诗与分数一点都不挂钩），发上来的目的，一个是欣赏，但更值得借鉴的是写诗对孩子文化和情调的培养熏陶，写诗让人安心，写诗让人勇敢，写诗让人进入一个新的世界。
如果喜欢，让你的孩子也写写吧~真的很容易！
介绍一下最容易写的英文诗歌形式：Cinquain and List poems
Cinquain is a poem made up of five lines. Look at these examples.
特点就是：第一行---主题（名词）；第二行---两个形容词描述主题；第三行---3个形容词描述主题；第四行---四个词，词性没有硬性规定；第五行---回归主题，但要有主题升华，词性不限
List poems are poems that list things, which have a flexible line length and repeated phrases. Some rhyme while others don't.
清单诗，有点像流水账哦~~但是乐趣十足！Look at these examples.
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喜欢这个主题的请顺手点个赞！
谢谢坛子里的鹭宝宝和勤勤恳恳的鹭爸爸，发上充满生活情趣的小诗。
以为写诗是很难的，but writing a poem is easier than you might think，摘录学生的几篇诗作（学生程度不算好，略高于职高水平，三流高中
，有几位英语高考150分可能只能30分吧，能写出这样的诗，足以说明写诗与分数一点都不挂钩），发上来的目的，一个是欣赏，但更值得借鉴的是写诗对孩子文化和情调的培养熏陶，写诗让人安心，写诗让人勇敢，写诗让人进入一个新的世界。如果喜欢，让你的孩子也写写吧~真的很容易！
介绍一下最容易写的英文诗歌形式：Cinquain and List poems
Cinquain is a poem made up of five lines. Look at these examples.
Brother
Beautiful, athletic
Teasing, shouting, laughing
Friend and enermy too
Mine
Summer
Sleepy, salty
Drying, drooping, dreading
Week in, week out
Endless
特点就是：第一行---主题（名词）；第二行---两个形容词描述主题；第三行---3个形容词描述主题；第四行---四个词，词性没有硬性规定；第五行---回归主题，但要有主题升华，词性不限
List poems are poems that list things, which have a flexible line length and repeated phrases. Some rhyme while others don't.
清单诗，有点像流水账哦~~但是乐趣十足！Look at these examples.
I saw a fish-portal all on fire
I saw a fish-pond all on fire,
I saw a house bow to a squire,
I saw a person twelve-feet high,
I saw a cottage in the sky,
I saw a balloon made of lead,
I saw a coffin drop down dead,
I saw two sparrows run a race,
I saw two horses making lace,
I saw g girl just like a cat,
I saw a kitten wear a hat,
I saw a man who saw these too,
And said though strange they all were true.
Our first football match
We would have won ...
if Jack had scored that goal,
if we'd had just a few more minutes,
if we had trained harder,
if Ben had passed the ball to Joe,
if we'd had thousands of fans screaming,
if I hadn't taken my eye off the ball,
if we hadn't stayed up so late the night before,
if we hadn't taken it easy,
if we hadn't run out of energy.
We would have won ...
if we'd been better!
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Cinquain and list poems written by my Ss in 2014
Cinquain
Panda
Cute, lazy
Hugging, eating, playing
Friendly and beautiful too
Treasure
(by Wang Binbin)
Dandelion
Pretty, light
Floating, flying, gliding
Just like a dream
Magical
(by Liu Jing)
Father
Humorous, considerate
Worrying, blaming, caring
Friend and teacher too
Mine
(by Zhu Weier)
Spring
Lively, fresh
Warming, comforting, growing
Wakes all things up
Green
(by Zheng Qiao)
Wind
Gentle, soft
Dancing, wondering, floating
Blow away all unhappiness
Comfortable
(by Sun Yuemei)
School
Busy, happy
Studying, playing, talking
Classmates, teachers and friends
Together
(by Ye Qun)
Tomorrow
Mysterious, fantastic
Awaiting, approaching, coming
Everyone looks forward to
Endless (Promising)
(by Yu Zhenni)
Batman
Strong, quick
Flying, shooting, beating
Knock down bad guys
Hero
(by Hu Haoting)
List Poems
A Poor Test Result
I would have succeeded…
If I had reviewed more carefully
If I had been calm in the class
If I hadn’t had a cold the night before
If I had asked for teachers more often
I would have succeeded
If I’d been hard-working!
(by Chen Yutai)
Our Poor Environment
We could have lived in a better environment…
If people hadn’t cut down thousands of trees
If people hadn’t wasted so much water
If people hadn’t drained off so much polluted air
If we had tried to drive cars as less as we could
If we had managed to protect the animals as many as possible
We could have lived in a much better environment
If we had been better!
(by Zhang Yanan)
(by Zhang Yanan)
I remembered the life in the countryside
I remembered the life in the countryside
A large lush wood
Hardworking farmers
Birds singing in the early morning
Frogs jumping in the rain
Butterflies resting on the fragrant flowers
I remembered the life in the countryside.
(by Zhang Xinyu)
If I were a drop of water
If I were a drop of water
I would jump into the sea playing with fishes
I would hide into the cloud watching all cities
I would go to the desert watering the plants
I would knock against the window playing music
I would gather friends together falling from the sky
If I were a drop of water
(by Guo Shuying)
说说我的看法高级模式
If a tire goes kaput
the car will be fine with a replacement tire
If a cake is kaput
I don’t think someone will eat it
If a pair of shoes is kaput
That pair of shoes will be thrown away or be mended.
If a painting is ruined
then the painting will be ripped and thrown in the trash
What about our life goes kaput?
Will we fix it?
Will we give up?
Or just give up？
Before our life goes kaput
We have to rescue it
We have to let our life colourful
Let us do something new
Let us see the world in another perspective
and we'll make life better
A brand new world
A brand new life
A brand new yourself.