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本帖最后由 yaoyao0701 于 2014-8-8 11:44 编辑

Anna's stories 1:The disappearingkey消失的钥匙
Anna's stories 2:The living picture图片活了
Anna's stories 3:Anna Vs. Magical snake安娜大战妖蛇
Anna's stories 4:Anna's magicthings

Anna's stories 5:Discovering the castle发现宝藏
Anna's stories6:待续。。。


Anna knew where there was a castle which had many magic books and treasures in it. After three challenges Anna and her friends would get into the castle.

The first challenge was two walls separately made of fire and bramble. The fire was magic fire which can’t be extinguished by normal water. Anna used ice balls to put out the fire. They turned the brambles into flowers so they could go past.

The second was a leopard with three heads. Anna tried cutting all of the heads at the same time, but the heads grew back. Anna used fire balls to burn it’s neck. The leopard was quickly burned by the fire and turned into ash.

The third one was a wall. The wall was very high. Anna tried flying over it, but no matter how high she flew, the wall always grew higher. They found a lock on the wall. When a butterfly flew by, Anna suddenly saw something shiny beside the butterfly. Anna looked at it closer and saw that it was a key on the thorn of a rose bush. But it still didn’t open thelock. When a gust of wind blew, they heard a noise. The noise repeated several times. Anna went to check where the noise came from. Anna saw another key on the willow tree. It was repeatedly hitting the tree trunk. Anna tried the second key. But it also didn’t work. Anna thought that since there were two keys, they must both be used. She then tried the two keys put together making a bigger key. The lock opened. The wall slid into two parts leaving a passage. After they all walked in the wall closed again.

Finally Ann and her friends got into the castle. There were many rooms in the castle. They had thought they had to find the rooms that held books and the one that held treasures by themselves. They found a map on a wall. The map showed where the two rooms were. Anna and Lily thought the books were better than the treasures so they went to the book room. They opened a book and found all kinds of magic in it. The others wanted treasures more so they went to the treasures room. They did find a lot of treasure.

发现宝藏
安娜知道有一个城堡,城堡里有很多关于魔法的书和宝藏。但必须过三道关卡安娜和她的朋友们才能进入城堡。

第一道关卡是两面墙,一面是用火焰做的,一面是用荆棘做的。火焰是魔法火焰,不能被普通的水熄灭。安娜用冰球把火焰熄灭,又把荆棘变成花朵。他们就顺利通过了。

第二道关卡是一只有三个头的豹子。安娜试着一下子把它的三个头全部砍掉,但是头又长了回来。安娜用火球烧断豹子的脖子,豹子就被慢慢化为灰烬。

第三道关卡是一面很高很高的墙。安娜试着飞过去,可是她们飞多高墙也跟着长多高。他们发现墙上有一把锁。这时一只蝴蝶飞过来,安娜看见蝴蝶旁边有一个亮闪闪的东西,安娜凑近一看,原来是一把钥匙在玫瑰刺上。但是这把钥匙打不开锁。一股风吹过来时,大家听见了一些特别的声音。安娜走过去看看哪里发出的声音,她看见一把钥匙绑在柳树的枝条上,正反复敲打着树干。安娜很高兴,取下钥匙试了试,还是打不开锁。安娜想了个办法,她把两把钥匙合到一起成为一把大钥匙,锁被打开了。墙从中间往两边滑出一条路来,他们走进去以后墙又合上了。

安娜和她的朋友们终于进入了城堡,他们本来以为必须靠自己找到那两间放书和放宝藏的屋子。但是他们发现一面墙上有一张地图,地图上画出了那两间屋子的具体位置。安娜和莉莉觉得魔法书更重要,他们就去了藏书的屋子。他们翻开一本书,里面有各种各样的魔法。其他的人都更喜欢宝藏,于是去了藏宝藏的地方,他们发现了好多金银珠宝。
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